Open Poetry #18 |
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Fireside Delight |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The grandfather clock ticks behind us As the rain falls so heavily outside It's in front of the roaring fire Where you and I now reside Like a log that burns brightly in the fire So does my love burn for you Beneath this warming amber glow There's so much that we could do Our bodies glow in profile from the firelight As you tenderly put my hair behind my ears Then your arms reach slowly around me And draw my body towards you so near The wine is the color of rubies In the crystal glass I hold in my hand We've now captured each others attention And together as one we both stand You take my face in your hands and you kiss me I suddenly feel so very weak at the knees Our passions without a match are ignited As we are both so very eager to please Our bare feet sink seductively into the sheepskin The place where our fine love will succumb Two hearts will be beating in time As two souls will so soon become one Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!Sensual romance at its very best....I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT...You are a wonderfully passionate writer. **big hugs** ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you paint such a beautiful romance beside the fireplace soooooo wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) May your heart forever reflect the flame of beauty and happiness of true love, we all love you so much, this is soooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
WOW!!!I'm sweating here Sue...and it's not from the fireplace !!!!Beautifully romantic and passionate poem !!!! |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Vivid and Beautiful. Your work always is. |
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