Open Poetry #18 |
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They Say Love is Blind (miscarriage poem) |
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armswideopen New Member
since 2002-01-21
Posts 4 |
In Loving Memory of Bib They say love is blind and you made this true. I never got to place you in a outfit either pink or blue. Never rocked you in my arms as you quietly slept. Not one tear did i get to dry as you sadly wept. I loved you none the less with all of my heart. My world crashing down when we were torn apart. I dream of you wrapped in a blanket of a white angel wing.. The lullaby you hear is the comfort I wanted to bring. I stillhold you everyday the only way i know how. God doesn't take my love for you this much he does allow. It is as stong as it would have been if I would have seen you. After my journey in life is done I will carry my love through. It will carry me straight to you, you will never be hard to find. We will be together and I will hold the love that was blind. Looking into eyes that are mine that show a soul I made. I will place you upon my chest where you always should have laid. They say love is blind and you made this come true. I will place you in an outfit either pink or blue. I will rock you in my arms as you quietly sleep. I will dry your tears as you happily weep. Christine R. Sinkel Jan. 20, 2001 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Christine, welcome to Passions. This is heartbreaking. I've been there. God bless you. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Incredibly heart-wrenching poem, Christine. We welcome you with open arms into our family.. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() ![]() Quite a sad first post. Hope things are better for you now. I shall look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Christine, this is sooooooo heartbreaking but beautiful, we all embrace you with arms wide open to your heart! (sigh) This is such a powerful debut, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Welcome to Passions, sweet Christine, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Christine, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome, well written poem about a sad subject, a while back I wrote some poems about my sister's miscarriage, I feel for you ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem was so hard for me to read but you have managed to capture so many of my own thoughts when I went through this same thing. My heart goes out to you...Welcome to Passions...you write from the heart with pure emotion and that means I will love your poetry. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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armswideopen New Member
since 2002-01-21
Posts 4 |
Thank you all so much, I really appreciate the warm welcomes and compliments on my poem. May not be the best poem but I swear it's the best therapy ![]() |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hon, yes it IS therapy and it is a beautiful poem. I just came back to read it again. You touched my heart so. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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china doll Junior Member
since 2002-01-20
Posts 22 |
very touching....I cry tears for I feel your pain in this poem.I could not imagine this happening to me. You are so brave for hanging on and feeling hope, because there is hope, one day you will able to look into your baby's eyes and cherish with all of your heart! Lots of Love....Joanna |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
This brought tears to my eyes and a lump to my throat....I could feel the love you have for your lost child, it weeps freely from each verse...you are so right in your child being an angel. I know the pain of this kind of loss...and the strength my daughter still gives me from the other side. Her tiny face still visible every time I close my eyes,the smile she held even in her last moments. I treasure this image and will one day hug her again. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Welcome to Passions! Your words reach deep into my heart and the pain can be felt through your words. Beautiful! Keep writing! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very familiar were your sad words about your beautiful angel. My close friend lost her first baby who was stillborn. She asked me to write something for her and I did. I hope you don't mind if I send it to you in the hope that it helps you to deal with your tragic loss. This was so very heartfelt and extremely moving. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions ![]() |
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armswideopen New Member
since 2002-01-21
Posts 4 |
thank you I sure don't mind if you would send it to me would love to read anything that may help thanks again so glad I found this site I will have to post some more poems tommorow. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Even though this piece is extremely sad, it is well penned. You've done a wonderful job with expression, rhyme and flow. I am so sorry for your loss. Welcome to Passions, I hope you'll enjoy it here. ~Sheri |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions! This is such a heartbreaking poem. I am so sorry for your loss. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your pain just weeps from between the lines, Christine...the poem is very beautiful and very heartbreaking. Welcome to passions...and I hope that you find writing poetry as therapeutic as I do. Thanks for sharing this one. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I am so sorry for your lose..and I too understand the pain. Welcome to the Passions family. Poetry is healing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I share your grief, and I share your passion to write. You say it may not be the best? Oh, but it is, when it comes from the heart. I hope to see more of you and your talents here. I think your child would approve... Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting... Karilea |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
![]() Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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