»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #18
»
Honeydew Kisses
| Open Poetry #18 |
|
Honeydew Kisses |
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
|
Honeydew kisses and misty rose whispers flow like ripples in a pond Sweltering springs and Smokey Mountain wine swirling with crimson notions Feverish lips dripping with desire upon a bearskin rug Honeydew kisses and misty rose whispers please uncork this yearning of mine Tickle me with whispers of bluegrass up and down my spine as I kiss the southern lights in your Smokey Mountain eyes You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 06:24 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Victoria - All Rights Reserved | |||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
as I kiss the southern lights in your Smokey Mountain eyes Oh Victoria, do I love this or what?!! Going in my library for sure! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
||
|
His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very sensual and delightful reading. I enjoyed this. Cheryl |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Chris..Glad you enjoyed those lines too ha..nice to hear from you  Cheryl..thank you so much..happy you enjoyed hugss |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love in the Smokies...Surely that would be an awesome place to feel the beauty of love. Nicely done Vic... |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sweltering springs and Smokey Mountain wine swirling with crimson notions ...this reminded me of the art of scrying...this is other worldly in its visions. Very beautiful, Victoria. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Honeydew kisses and misty rose whispers please uncork this yearning of mine Tickle me with whispers of bluegrass up and down my spine as I kiss the southern lights in your Smokey Mountain eyes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Victoria!! Sounds like your muse just got back from a cruise on the love boat!  You are on a roll! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ...Oh I love this! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Barry..i have never been there but i can only imagine like all of us poets do Serenity..thank you very much..im glad you enjoyed my words.. James..thank you for peeking in Nancy..Yes sounds like she had a good time haa...who ever she is ha..  Noah dear one..an i only wish the same for you HUGSS [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 05:17 PM).] |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always suckle the sweetness of true love and may loves whispers echo upon the waters of your heart and fill you with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tickle me with whispers ..wonder if I will ever get that feeling again... you do know how to make one smile in remembrance *s hugss M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-21-2002 05:29 PM).] |
||
|
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Victoria......oh, how i smiled at this! One of my fondest times and memories were going up to a chalet every other year or so in the Smokey Mountains, sipping wine, cranking tunes over the mountain air..... If....when....i go again, i will take this with me...and toast you and your sensory and touching poem of longing. tSR *with those Smokey Mountain eyes* |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* what a wonderfully romantic place this vision shows me...I love it. **big hugs** *sigh* romance flows so well from your pen. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
makes me drool........ Kathleen--(Kay) |
||
|
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh yeah! this i like..!! very nice pictures you paint... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah..sweetie you a beautiful human being..i wish the best for you always.. wynter..your Prince Charming will come very soon hugsSR..Yes you remember this poem..nice to know SR it brought back some lovely memories of the Smokey Mountains..hope many more to come Karen..thank you Karen..and your pen flows with ink of passion too. hugs Kathleen..ha...thank you hon..hugs to ya dg..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed.. hugss [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 09:56 PM).] |
||
|
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
You come to me in gentle cover Bodies molding to each contour Mounts and hollows to discover Soft petals spread in sweet allure Deeply buried seats my passion Unhurried is rapture’s gentle gate Sweet ecstasy we must ration Speed not this euphoria’s abate Senses sensuously stroked to peak Cinder flares into brilliant flame The intensity of stars we seek With wanting we’ll not let tame Silk veiled touch is gifted voice Loud whimpers of raw emotion In rapture’s dance we rejoice Soft and sensual is our motion Sorry, couldn't help but put in a continuation for this passionate and arrousing poem of yours. You have penned this in perfection dear friend!! |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Doesn't get any better! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Victoria - Such an elegant, smooth flow to this sensual write. Very nice. Dave |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Brian..Oh Brian i hope this one doesnt disappear into the adult section..ha..i will have to write a few more of these mountain poems haa..nice to know I inspired this sensuous poem ..thank you very much Newell..I was just in your website..how ironic Nowell...lovely site you have..and thank you for peeking in Dave..Im happy you enjoyed dave..thank you for reading tonight.. [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 10:18 PM).] |
||
|
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so sensual, honeydew kisses and smokey mountain wine. just lovely Victoria. floria |
||
|
Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
The title caught my eye! Lovely Lovely! |
||
|
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL WRITING!!!! Victoria...what a stunning gift you have, a special gift of expressing passion in poetic tides. ***Ivy Rose |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you floria..i enjoyed writing this one..glad you liked hugss zukene chick..thank you for visiting today kathleen.thank you for your sweet comments..so nice of you to say.. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
