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Rodney Belcher
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Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2002-01-21 11:28 AM


Why am I who I am
Why do I try
Is there love left
In our still beating hearts
Is there a tomorrow
Was yesterday all we thought it was
Maybe we have been lying
Misled by need, not love
Scared by the thought
Of a second chance
Too much to give up on
Without another try
Confusion is my only friend
Loneliness my sole companion
I hope the day comes soon
That’ll solve this terrible quandary

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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1 posted 2002-01-21 12:12 PM


Rodney, this is very well written and I like all the questions you pose. Something to think about. Enjoyed your poetry. Cheryl
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-01-21 12:18 PM


I can relate to this, but deep inside my heart
there is way too much to lose by giving up.

Hang in there!


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just out of reach
3 posted 2002-01-21 02:19 PM


Rodney - Just sit down and have a coffee and a sweet roll !! Things will work out. I have felt the way you have expressed yourself in your writing many times. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-01-21 03:30 PM


Yes and I hope the day comes soon also...James
Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-03-31 11:23 PM


Life is sooo confusing sometimes....
Nice write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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