Open Poetry #18 |
Deep Inside of Me |
Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Why am I who I am Why do I try Is there love left In our still beating hearts Is there a tomorrow Was yesterday all we thought it was Maybe we have been lying Misled by need, not love Scared by the thought Of a second chance Too much to give up on Without another try Confusion is my only friend Loneliness my sole companion I hope the day comes soon That’ll solve this terrible quandary Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Rodney, this is very well written and I like all the questions you pose. Something to think about. Enjoyed your poetry. Cheryl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I can relate to this, but deep inside my heart there is way too much to lose by giving up. Hang in there! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Rodney - Just sit down and have a coffee and a sweet roll !! Things will work out. I have felt the way you have expressed yourself in your writing many times. Well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes and I hope the day comes soon also...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Life is sooo confusing sometimes.... Nice write!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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