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Cerulian Dreamscape
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Cerulian Dreamscape |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
ok this poem is one of those that's actually two poems, can be read seperately or together. Don't know what the name of that kind of poetry is but yeah... Some of the lines don't quite flow together but this is also my first attempt at this. Inspired by a friend and a few of his dreams... "Cerulian Dreamscape" Dreams are cursed through the night ~ Seeing nothing but blue Brought on by visions seen in the light ~ Where everything rolls into view Taking over every thought ~ Finally surrendering in the end Though one could say the battle was hard fought ~ But becomes a game of pretend. Cursed or blessed ~ Enjoyment sometimes brought And occasionally missed ~ When the forbidden images are sought. Seen through the eyes of few ~ Understood by less Always tormented until the morning's hue ~ Usually creating in one's head a confused mess. When friends close at hand ~ Learn of the pleasing torture Grow larger than the land ~ And become tempted by its lure Fears and yet pleaures can be found, ~ Much like a goldigger's find Always to these dreams will the present and future be bound ~ Never to be erased or ignored in the memories of one's mind. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is soft, delicate, I enjoyed this very much! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Stephanie, there will always be dreams and joys waiting for us out in the wild blue yonder, and there are all just a heartbeat away! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephanie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Quite a bit better than my first try at one of these. Very nice love. (:  http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you made me want to try this, melds beautifully as one, and twice as nice as two! Hmmm...I LIKE!  |
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