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Open Poetry #18
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rebekah33
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since 2001-12-13
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0 posted 2002-01-21 02:35 AM

One word.
The most beautiful
word I've ever seen.
It sings as i look at it,
not believing.
I long to reach out
and trace the path
the pencil took.
To feel where the lead
was used harder,
with more emphasize.
To see the gray residue
on my finger afterwards,
to know its real

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain
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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-21 02:56 AM

Absolutely incredible!  I will read this again and again.
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2 posted 2002-01-21 01:02 PM



(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the beautiful words you write! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you continue to write the most beautiful visions of your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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