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Open Poetry #18

You in my thoughts

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 01:30 AM

When you walk across my mind-
I lose all sense of time,

I picture you at night,
Your image makes everything right,

I think of you during the day,
And ecstasy is paved all the way,

When you are not with me,
Meeting you the next time is all I see,

I feel you when you are not around,
My ears listen without a sound,

I want you at every instance,
So I can close the distance,

When I can’t see you in reality,
I am left feeling empty.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (01-21-2002 01:32 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-21 02:41 AM

Wow, someone is really on your mind! Hope the dreams becomes a reality. A good write!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2002-01-21 07:52 PM

Must be someone real special

Titia

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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-01-21 08:27 PM

This is very good. Sounds like you have someone very special in your life.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2002-01-22 12:38 PM

sorry to disappoint, but this poem is based on fiction.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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