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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-01-20 10:39 PM



You carry oceans through silence:
blue sky washing sultry Mondays
with a soft symphony of notes.
You are the world to me
~~~~the Atlas of my soul.
Your arms are wide enough
to circle my whole universe.
And, my heart sails upon glassy seas
washed ashore by my deep desire.
I am swept through the silence
upon the frothy waves of need,
barrelling recklessly over
newly created falls of forever love.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Rodney Belcher
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1 posted 2002-01-20 10:45 PM


WOW!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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2 posted 2002-01-20 10:51 PM






(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint the most lovely surreal visions! May you forever carry oceans with your love and be encircled by paradise in rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is escellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-20 10:52 PM


I can see Mr. Atlas now!
This really perked me up, let me tell you

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Startime
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4 posted 2002-01-20 11:47 PM


This poem is absolutely stunning, Ivy...I love it...**big hugs** Has love come to you?..I sure hope so...you are so very deserving of it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

poeticdreamer
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5 posted 2002-01-21 12:01 PM


So very lovely is this beautiful piece! poeticdreamer
strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-21 09:26 AM


Ivy Rose your words are breath taking. floria
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2002-01-21 09:53 AM


I once felt like this, maybe even twice..
this tweaked my heart.

M

Victoria
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8 posted 2002-01-21 10:09 AM


And, my heart sails upon glassy seas
washed ashore by my deep desire.


Beautiful Ivy Rose..as always

           ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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