Open Poetry #18 |
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Carrying Oceans |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
You carry oceans through silence: blue sky washing sultry Mondays with a soft symphony of notes. You are the world to me ~~~~the Atlas of my soul. Your arms are wide enough to circle my whole universe. And, my heart sails upon glassy seas washed ashore by my deep desire. I am swept through the silence upon the frothy waves of need, barrelling recklessly over newly created falls of forever love. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
WOW! Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint the most lovely surreal visions! May you forever carry oceans with your love and be encircled by paradise in rapture! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is escellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I can see Mr. Atlas now! This really perked me up, let me tell you ![]() Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem is absolutely stunning, Ivy...I love it...**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
So very lovely is this beautiful piece! poeticdreamer |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ivy Rose your words are breath taking. floria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I once felt like this, maybe even twice.. this tweaked my heart. M |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
And, my heart sails upon glassy seas washed ashore by my deep desire. Beautiful Ivy Rose..as always ![]() ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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