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Without You
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Without You |
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Oz Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 13South Carolina |
Without You I can't breathe without you I cant' see without you In my life I can't live without you My heart bleeds without you In my life I can't go on without you My life is gone without you In my life I feel so cold without you I'm so alone without you In mylife Please come back to me. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to the forum. This is sorrowful...I would never critique anything this sensitive. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful feelings of loneliness and desperation, Oz. Heartbreaking to read. Wonderful expression though. Welcome to Passions. I hope to read more of your work here.  All writing comes |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
know these feelings all too well...hoping to welcome home my estranged wife very soon...have faith and pray...and keep writing...it does seem to help...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh Oz, I hope you feel better soon because feeling like this stinks! I missed your first post, but WELCOME!!!! RP |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Been there....done that...I can relate. Welcome to the group |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is sooo sad! Hope things get better for you soon. Welcome aboard Passions friendship train. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Oz, this is soooooo sad, our hearts all cry to you! (big hugggsssss) Hang in there, sweet friend, love will come to your heart and you will forever sing with loves faith and happiness as long as you love and believe in yourself! (sigh) Our hearts go out to you., sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oz, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think many of us have experienced this at some time in our lives. You remind me of those feelings of angst, you have written it very clearly. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I understand this cry in the night, when part of you wants the night to end, and another part cannot face the daylight. Welcome, and may tomorrow be easier. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oz, welcome. Wanna sit and feel miserable together? Dee |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Breathing goes on, each breath a pain The sorrow is something you tame And just go on without Emptiness steals the soul from the middle Each heartbeat will always bleed a little As you go on without The coldness of missing will always stay Even if there’s a returning some day And go with or without. Liked you simple expression of grief, Hope you don’t mind my building from it a bit. A bit repetitive for some, but that’s good for this sort of theme. Gloom |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hope they come back to heal the pain that flows from your words. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so sad, I feel for you. You have written from your soul my friend. Lean on God, he will hear you. floria |
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