Open Poetry #18 |
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Our Seaside Escape |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
Our jeans are rolled up to our knees As we walk along the shore You retrieve a piece of driftwood Washed up from the night before Many treasures of the ocean Will arrive on the incoming tide At the edge of this beautiful ocean Is where you and I often reside We come here for the serenity A place where we declare our love As we both marvel at nature's beauty We watch the seagulls fly high above Most of all we're drawn to the water As we immerse ourselves in blue In this place we escape the rat race And all our troubles fade from view Suetang |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Everyone must have a lovely place to go to escape the stresses of life..lovely Sue..hugs ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Love it! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...I am a sucker for seaside walks, romance, etc...So...needless to say..I did enjoy this poem...well done... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) It make sme so happy to see you've found a place to relax and find peace and happiness with true love, may you forever share this paradise with the one you love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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