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Night Moonbeams |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“NIGHT MOONBEAMS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Bedtime skies looking at me, heavens I search, wondering… What’s up there I missed, the beauty I might see… Stars intense with brilliance, heavenly bodies stunning… Standing there in the light, my fragile spirit mending… Wanting you, waiting there, no other, this special moment… Out of the misty darkness, hearts no longer absent… Whispers of passions delight, letting go of daydreams… Come together, bodies touching, dancing, in night moonbeams… ~~~~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes letting go of daydreams and making it real. great poem Bill. floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~Whispers of passions delight, letting go of daydreams… Come together, bodies touching, dancing, in night moonbeams…~ hmmmmmm I love those moonbeams....love the whole poem.....*sigh* love it as always ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a wonderful feeling this brings Bill. To have a daydream come into reality. What bliss. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill Such a heavenly picture you have painted here. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
letting go of daydreams would be wonderful if you could replace them with moonlight thoughts... nice as always Bill M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I especially liked the first verse. Wondering what's up there that I've missed. Lovely poem Bill Charles. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whispers of passions delight, letting go of daydreams… Come together, bodies touching, dancing, in night moonbeams… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is wonderful Bill! Truly enjoyed this one! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
my fragile spirit mending… Oh, I do hope this is true!! Lovely writing here Bill, ejoyed!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, the visions you create are always sooooo enchanting! (big hugggsssss) May you and your love forever be kissed by the moonbeams and glisten in the promise of love to last forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always make me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* "night moonbeams" you use such romantic terms....so romantic in fact that quite often your words inspire me to use the same in some of my poems...This poem is stunning, Bill and has left me with you uniquely magical touch. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy Oh my! I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent. You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself. This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ Dance away, its a lovely dance floor created here....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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