Open Poetry #18 |
Moment Of Begin |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Moment Of Begin lost within the roads you roam you found a place in my heart, a home and I greet you with arms tender this shall be your last surrender gone are your nights and days of silence void we are words in rhyme enjoyed I anoint you myself I pour the moment of begin with so much more "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Very nice! This had a lovely quick-paced flow that just leads one on further into the poem. Very nice indeed! Lve, Bonne |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully composed and crafted thoughts. Well done ... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - treasures of thoughts, most beautiful... BC |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, Helen. Utterly beautiful! All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this magical moment forever repeat itself and make you fall in love all over again everyday forever! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
this shall be your last surrender BRAVO!!!And I bet he has surrendered most happily...this is beautiful..and filled with a grace only you can give it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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