Open Poetry #18 |
It's all about you |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I wait for a moment- when I will see your face, this love becomes desperate- when others hear my case, Through utter silence I grieve alone, trying to hide the love unknown, When daylight arrives- I feel relieved, knowing I will see you, this is what I believe, but then comes night, and you are no were in sight, each night haunts, to be with your is all I want. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Through utter silence I grieve alone, trying to hide the love unknown," Xeonox, nice to meet you. Being alone can really hurt. This poem expresses that pain well. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thank you for your response. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i wish i wrote this....... you said it so well! |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Touching poem. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Touching poem. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Xeonox, Enjoyed the read. |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Well written, I can feel the conflicting emotions in this. Cheers! |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Hi there, I have missed reading your poems. This is awesome, powerful.. well written. ~LL |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I again thank you for the response. This poem was written while I was visiting India. I met a girl their and I wrote it for her. The ending was not the happy ending we see in movies. But overall she was the inspiration of the poem and I gave her a copy too. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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