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Still King of Beasts (repost)
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Still King of Beasts (repost) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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With a proud stance and a regal face surrounded by a jostled mane ready to set his claim he leads a entourage of ladies all on his domain they search to feed and keep his needs nestled in a group called pride from their prey they hide. it's difficult to compete with agile youngsters quick on their feet, yet after a day's hard conquest they settle at what they do best... On the hard savannah floor where in the wild there are no mores, they writhe and tussle on the scrub... next to a massage, comes a nice back rub |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent. You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself. If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it?  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Marsha, Why thankyou. This one was hiding in the nature section of Moontown, where there were few visitors compared to the rhyme section. What I like here is that there isn't this barrier  |
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