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Open Poetry #18

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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2002-01-19 11:52 PM

You are enigma
You are a cruel kindness;
an incubus who dangles
The feeling of love over my head,
But I'm too stupid to reach for it
You are my reason for life;
A demon who shoves joyful feeling
Into my arms, and puts them
Back everytime I throw them away
You are the first person who has
Shown me absolute love.
An angel scarred for life
Wings tattered so she can't fly anymore
But, still she lives on
Maybe in desperation
Maybe in hoping that one day again
She will beable to fly
And that her scars will be
Over looked by the people around her.

This was made from what I said about my friend, and what he said about me. So, I would like to give Acro credit, as well.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-20 01:52 AM

Inspiration from friends yield beautiful results. An enjoyable, positive read.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-01-20 02:49 AM

It is a crime to allow ones feelings to be manipulated. We all have our limits as to what we can live with and without.

I liked this, even though I don't like the word stupid. No one should ever allow their feelings to make them feel that way.

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