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The Companion |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Every day Sarah Jones took a walk in the park she'd stare at the initials carved in the bark. Talking to her companion while feeding the doves telling the same story of a long lost love. Her companion didn't speak, but listened with care to all of the words that Sarah wanted to share. Sarah spoke softly of a man she once knew with a smile so bright, and eyes oh so blue. Talking for hours, or just bits at a time her companion listened, never seeming to mind. They always found their way to her favorite tree the ducks on the lake she wanted to see. She'd speak of life, of love and such things often saying "You never know what life might just bring." Everyday then Sarah would say her goodbye always adding "Meet me tomorrow, or at least please try." Then one day Sarah went to her favorite tree although her companion was no where to be. Suddenly then from the corner of Sarah's eye an elderly man touched the initials and started to cry. With trembling fingers she reached to touch his hand her own had once matched his wedding band. He said he couldn't believe it was true after all of these years and they embraced through the happiest of tears. Gone they had said, but she never gave up hope her companion had helped her learn how to cope. She had found the strength to travel lifes way believing again she would see him some day. Then Sarah prayed, " I know you can hear, and I know your lingering somewhere near. Then through the tears on her face softly glistening she whispered "Thank you Lord, for always listening." 01-19-2002 On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-19-2002 12:55 AM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is a beautiful story.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Loved the twist ending. Well crafted and thought out. [This message has been edited by texasrose (01-19-2002 10:15 AM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ you are very gifted in your words, each poem is lovely and so tender....  HUGS my friend.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this poem touched my heart so deeply that tears flowed freely....I love it...Thank you, so very much, for sharing it with me. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
GentleSpirit, I miss your picture and fear a story is behind that empty spot. However, know I am thinking of you. This poem is fabulous...a keeper and requires a quiet moment to reflect and appreiciate fully which I will do during a quiet moment after church. Thank you and strength and peace to you kind friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Elizabeth so glad that you enjoyed. Rose, good to see you again. Glad you enjoyed it. Lauren, your words touch me. I sit in envy of so many great poets here at passions, and am just glad that I can learn from them. Thanks hon Startime, no need for tears. This story came to me in the middle of the night, so I just had to get up to write it. Oh Larry no, there is no sad story behind the picture being removed The intent was to only let it there for a while so I could share the one who makes me smile. He's still making me smile, no worries there. Just waiting to find an appropriate picture to put up. That one was really posted just for a short time period. Thanks for the thoughts though. And I am so glad that you enjoyed the story. Hugs to you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"Thank you Lord, for always listening." When ya gonna put your pretty face back? Cause I need to see who made me cry in the most poignant way. This is so lovely Donna. Your heart is so very gentle. They are one.~somy Sincerely, Regina |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry to think of the happiness bestowed upon her to Him for offering her that sweet memory of the most gorgeous love to last forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely narrative poem, well-woven. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gentle Spirit, This brought a tear to my eye and a warm feeling in my heart. I really enjoyed reading this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reg, as soon as I get my disk back.....and you help me get it to size again!! thanks hon. but hey......no tears allowed ok? that face of yours is to pretty for tears! Noah, you are the light that brightens our days. Thanks for always taking your time and reading.....hugs. Vas, I thank you for stopping by. Appreciate the thoughts. Nightshade, didnt mean to bring tears to a soft heart. Thanks for taking the time to leave a thought or two. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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