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Free Captive
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Free Captive |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada 
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Free Captive In gentle point you race the sky Your song gifts peace of mind As each new leader comes to front Last falls in ranks behind In form of “V” you grace my sight Motions strong and flowing How I envy your gift of flight Places you’ll be going Each spring and fall you gift me awe Free captive of your grace Incurring comfort in your flight And soft feathered embrace Brian Beaudry |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
Very nicely done! Good rhyming pattern, good rhymes, very descriptive. Enjoyed it ! Harry |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, ooohhhh...I too am always jealous and amazed by how Canadian geese and other birds fly in perfect form eevry time they migrate and bring such a lovely sight to the skies! (big hugggssss) I love it, sweet friend, I love your beautiful words and the gorgeous pictures you fit with them! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly penned Brian! Can't wait to see those Canadian geese headed back this way! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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