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Open Poetry #18

that lovers place

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

0 posted 2002-01-02 06:57 PM

One
Whiff
Takes
Me
Away
Into
The
Land
Of love
One
Look
Jets
Me
Past
The
Mountains
That
Stand
Proud
And tall
One
Gentle
Touch
Sends
Me
Soaring
Threw
The
Clouds
I
Can
Almost
See
The
Heavens
One
Word
Clouds
My
Mind
With
Thoughts
Of
You
One
Sweet
Kiss
Sends
Me
To
That
Wonderful
Place
Where
The skys
Are blue
And the
Seas
Are
Clear
That
Place
Few
Find
That
Place
Where
Lovers
Go.
~~~~~~~

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-02 07:03 PM

Erica, it sounds magical....

"After a time, you may find that "having" is not
so pleasing a thing, after all, as "wanting." It
is not logical, but it is often true. Spock, "

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-02 07:19 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Erica, may your loving heart forever sing in this lovers place with joy and happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-02 07:23 PM

This was really a different structure and it was so so so sweet. floria

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

4 posted 2002-01-02 07:48 PM

thanks everyone i apprecaite your replies

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

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