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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-01-17 11:13 PM

Taunting me,
from heaven's vault,
mock the stars,
of night's exalt.
Flaunting splendor,
jeweled ephods,
comes the night,
high priest of gods.
Reigning o'er
our mortal realm,
I kneel before,
night's overwhelm.
Partaking of
her sacrament,
I fear the night,
in sin, repent.
Within cathedral,
of star's light,
I cede control,
in welkin rite,
I cede control,
unto the night.

[This message has been edited by Tim (01-17-2002 11:23 PM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2002-01-17 11:20 PM

Tim...the night does change the way everything looks and feels..and you write such great poetry of the night.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-01-18 11:55 AM

The night can indeed be poetry in motion....I enjoyed this...

Greeneyes~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:56 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2002-01-18 11:58 AM

*sigh* magnificent....filled with the magic of the Gods of old and stardusted with passion. Stunning. I love this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-18 01:57 PM

Tim, I sincerely enjoy your poetry.

It is a pleasure to read.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-01-18 02:09 PM

Hauntingly inviting. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sunset
Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 80

6 posted 2002-01-18 02:18 PM

It takes talent to capture your own individuality in writing. You have done that, I've noticed, after reading several of your poems. My comliments!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-18 02:48 PM

YAY!!! I love it, sweet friend, you paint such a gorgeous evening through your words dazzled with His heavenliness! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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