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Across The Wind
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Across The Wind |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Across The Wind he calls to me from far away whispering words upon the wind they play a voice of velvet soft and warm dances between moon light and morn they tickle chimes and brush by branches pass by others with no advances looking for me only to have me hear words that can softly pull me near this tender touch of breeze that I claim carried across the wind he said my name "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, it is such a beautiful feeling to be swept away by the rapture of a lovers voice across the wind! (kiss on cheek) May he forever love you and fill you with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
Very nicely done ! Quite romantic and tender. A very enjoyable read! Cheers! HEG |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* The wind carries his voice with a gentle caress Saying you are his choice, the one he will possess *sigh* absolute perfection **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Helen, another gem from you your writing is soft and delicate just like the wind. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
This is so beautiful. So gently worded it feels like a whisper. I enjoyed this very much. Cheryl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, I just love your writing....this is just like a whisper in the wind....lovely. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, Dang, I think I'm going to quit writing . . . I've tried to write this very poem, more than once, but it never came out like this! OUTSTANDING (wihwt) e |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words flowed so beautifully and were so very much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - this is a very beautiful writing that you have done. Soft and tender, as you do. Lovely, very lovely... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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