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Kicking Sand
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Kicking Sand |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“KICKING SAND” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Wandering on the beach, surf’s mist in my face… Not knowing where I’m going, might be anyplace… Perhaps searching for you, we really haven’t met… I know I’ll meet you today, of this I’d make a bet… Just want someone that’s fair, loving, charming, and fragile… I’ll look all over the beach, possibly we’ll meet, accidental… It’s my heart, wanting to share, just waiting for you, to expand… Felt this way on the beach, wandering, just kicking sand… ~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, what a wonderfully adventurous romantic heart. Hope she bumps into your sandcastle, or 'captures' you while you are kicking some sand. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill..I know this is a serious write my friend...but, you worry me going around kicking sand like that...are you barefoot? There could be glass or broken bottles, or rocks or anything under that sand.... Please be careful....good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I really like this one Bill, very nicely done. floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. The descriptive way you use your lines is utterly superb. I could truly see the scene of the man strolling along the beach scanning the horizon waitind for THE woman to come into his life. I love this its full of hope and optimism, and the flow is utterly excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sounds like fun..just kicking sand..the beach has a way of making you forget about your problems...well at least some of the problems ha...enjoyed Bill ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving heart always shines with the beauty of a true romantic; may you find yourself treading toward the love of your life forever and roll around on the beach sands with her forever in happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
Bravo Bill, you put me right on that beach with you, kicking sand for love instead of in spite! poeticdreamer |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill, this is what walking on the beach inpires me to feel, also. Keep thinking the one you have waited for must be just around the next dune. Cause how else could you feel so much beauty and peace, and I dare say momentary happiness, with the ocean tickling your toes, and the sand so soft and warm. Guess I like this poem a lot.  Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I believe that I have walked down this beach. . . funny. . .the sand always seems to come back into my face. . . great job BC. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am sure she will find you...and be all that you want her to be...romantic perfection is woven in these words. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...I LOVE THE WAY YOU KICK SAND!!!! I hope you meet that special lady who will walk along the beach kicking sand with you. This poem at least 5 stars ******** ***Ivy Rose |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
If kicking sand on a lovely beach would keep the problems out of reach This Lady would join you in your walk. Always, Lady Ollyne [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-21-2002 08:11 AM).] |
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