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nikhilparekh
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since 2002-01-17

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-01-17 02:16 PM

"WRAPPED"

Wrap the innocuously sleeping child; in quilts of profoundly warm and compassionately silken fabric,
Wrap the colossal demeanor of ocean; with a vivacious flurry of gigantic waves,
Wrap the unfathomable cocoon of blue sky; with a colorfully mesmerizing and vivid rainbow,
Wrap the barren body of bland soil; with a coat of voluptuous green grass,
Wrap the blatantly naked tree; with a blanket of sumptuous and wildly tapering leaves,
Wrap the solitarily floating pearl; with an ingratiatingly carved shell of slimy oyster,
Wrap the sweltering deserts; with fathomless globules of slippery sand and mystically triangular camel footprints,
Wrap the rosy persona of tongue; with infinite buds of taste and tons of tangy saliva,
Wrap the daintily sculptured neck; with a festoon of glistening emeralds and immortal shine,
Wrap the gargantuan body of mountains; with the seductively cascading and impeccably white waterfall,
Wrap the rubicund complexioned lips; with an insatiably desirous and enchanting smile,
Wrap the bald scalp; with a shock of ravishing black hair swishing tantalizingly in the exuberant breeze,
Wrap the dilapidated castle walls; with coats of majestic ivory paint and overwhelming oligarchic charm,
Wrap the immaculate eyes; with an island of enamoring black eyelash and flamboyantly fiery dark mascara,
Wrap the embarrassingly fat tortoise; with a formidably hard shell and perennial peace,
Wrap the cosmos at night; with a resplendent carpet of twinkling stars,
Wrap the shivering conglomerate of bones; with salubrious and robust flesh,
Wrap the palpable heart; with a volley of thunderous and indefatigably passionate beats,
Wrap the divinely mother; with the cherished shadow of her perpetually innocent children,
And wrap my life O! Almighty Lord; with invincible love; with love as my greatest wealth and fortitude to exist not only for this birth; but for countless more births to unfurl….

©COPYRIGHT-2001, BY NIKHIL PAREKH

FOR MY FIRST COLLECTION OF POEMS: http://www.Kingfisherbooks.com/Bookshop-1.htm
(IN THE LAP OF MY MOTHER)

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-17 02:28 PM

Hi, Welcome to Passions! You got me wrapped up in your poem, nice imagery! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

RP

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2002-01-17 02:28 PM

nikhilparekh,

What a vivid scenes you write.. very descriptive. I can't see what else you have to offer

Welcome to Passions

I hope you love it here.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-17-2002 02:29 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-17 02:35 PM

WOW!!! Oh my gosh, your wonderful vocabulary and imagery amazes me in this wonderful debut! (sigh) Ooohhhhhh...I'm so happy you're published, we're all soooooo proud of you and I would love to purchase your work sometime! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) Welcome to Passions, sweet Nikhil, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nikhil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-01-17 04:06 PM

I'd say you have a great deal to think about wrapped up into this one poem. Welcome to Passions, and keep wrapping!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-01-17 07:25 PM

Welcome, Published Author! I hope you look around and can spend some time here, getting to know us, letting us get to know you! Welcome to Passions!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-17 08:01 PM

And He most certainly has done all of these
things...Welcome to Passions...

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