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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

0 posted 2002-01-14 06:09 PM

Moonlight In the Day

Beneath the moon,
I rest these tired eyes,
haunted by the visions past.
If only to forget...

I press a memory to mine heart,
remembrance of another time
when enlightened,
this Lady became.

I embraced thine every word,
reflections of blue in hazel,
of smiling eyes, warming mine heart.
'Twas moonlight in the day.

Captured each breath from thine lips,
tasting each thought
as if 'twasn't enough,
still overflowing with thee.

Lullabyes, whispering notes,
passionate and pure, carry thee,
each night reaching out, dancing me
into the moonlight of dreams.

Lovingly,
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-14 06:10 PM

What a lovely thought, moonlight in the day!

This is entirely beautiful!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-14 06:19 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, such heavenly romance fills your moonlit words! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is fabulous, may he forever reach out and take your breath away in heavenly passion! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nichole2005
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 20

3 posted 2002-01-14 06:31 PM

Gosh I am breathless and moved by this beautiful and magnificent piece. You make moonlight sound even more romantic than it already is. You are a wonderufl writter I ca't wait to see your next piece!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-14 06:36 PM

BRAVO!!!!this is so incredibly romantic and beautiful...I saw it first with Bill's poem and I am so glad you decided to post it on it's own. Magnificent love poem filled with heartfelt feelings. Stunning. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-14 07:25 PM

Lovely as always Lady..nice to be reading your moonlit words again..hugss enjoyed

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

6 posted 2002-01-14 07:35 PM

Very dignified and archaic (in a positive way). The mood and tone of the language adds to the feeling you weave.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-01-14 11:56 PM

*sigh*

I have missed thy words Poet Fair. . . to see thee again is like seeing the well after the desert. . . and, you have not failed to let us down. . .

flowingly done. . .

---------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-15 12:00 PM

My fairest Lady -

'Captured each breath from thine lips,
tasting each thought
as if 'twasn't enough,
still overflowing with thee.'

"Your breath have I captured,
and tasted each thought
never will it be enough
for I have tasted thine lips"

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (01-15-2002 12:00 AM).]

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

9 posted 2002-01-15 12:00 PM

I really enjoyed this. It is a wonderfully romantic read.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-01-15 12:04 PM

Nicely done...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-01-15 12:15 PM

Your style is so elegant,
as are you dear Lady~
...if you only you believed it.

Love and *hugs*

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-01-15 12:47 PM

The words flow very smoothly, like softened daylight moonbeams.

Fallon
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since 2002-01-07

Posts 21
USA

13 posted 2002-01-15 01:18 AM

Keep 'em coming please!!!!!

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

14 posted 2002-01-15 06:38 AM

words as sweet as a day G*d intended
when morning takes it first breath.

Lady O, i am fascinated and always a bit in awe of your work.
We can always depend on some great writing when your poems
appear. Don't ya know! *smiles*

SR

emily
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

15 posted 2002-01-15 01:18 PM

this is beautiful!

Emily

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2002-01-15 01:38 PM

Lady...you're home...and you're writing...

Thank goodness....

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

17 posted 2002-01-15 02:44 PM

I know of such moonlight that shares in my day .... it is as warm and brilliant as your work. An excellent write once again!

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

18 posted 2002-01-15 05:42 PM

Okay..I'm going to steal Sven's *sigh* here and just melt so they'll have to clean me up off the library floor. This was stunning!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

19 posted 2002-01-15 11:17 PM

So very romantic Lady, enjoyable read. floria

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

20 posted 2002-01-16 06:22 AM

Lady Kathleen,

On the eve before,
she penned her thanks
yet they would not rest
upon this blue,
so this Lady tries
once again,
to send her many
thanks to you.

Lady O
Sir Noah,

When romance fills
one's nightly dreams
and wakes thee
breathless too,
Ye shall feel
the touch of love
and heartwords
reaching you.

Thanking thee,
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

21 posted 2002-01-16 10:35 AM

Just wanted to read these soft words once again....

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Robert A
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since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

22 posted 2002-01-16 03:55 PM

East coast huh? God, where? I'm on my way.
I think I hear my armor chinking
Sorry, shouldn't be flirting, that's not allowed here right?

Robert

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

23 posted 2002-01-16 04:17 PM

Lady--So lushly romantic in language and meaning..much enjoyed!

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

24 posted 2002-01-16 05:44 PM

Surely, Lady Fair, you would allow one humble Romeo to adore your work.

Breathtaking.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

25 posted 2002-01-17 05:49 AM

Lady Nichole,

No more beautiful,
an eve can be,
unless in the moonlight,
with Knight and me.

Thanking thee for
delightful words,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Karen,

Sir Charles leaves steps
placed slightly so,
follow I shall, where e'er
he may go.
He stuns me with thoughts
and achieves to me goals,
cheering one's heart
to spirit one's role.

Dearest Lady ~V,

So gracious you are,
always to me.

Warm thoughts,
Lady Ollyne




"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-17-2002 05:50 AM).]

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

26 posted 2002-01-17 06:10 AM

Sir Bart,

This Lady,
She's very dignified,
although some may say
archaic, to be.
Her moods may swing
from day to day
but weave she must,
her tones for thee.

Smiling thanks,
Lady Ollyne

Sir Sven,

Sigh if you must
of missing her words,
but this Lady, She's seen
and knows what's been heard.
The rains filtered down,
flooded her eyes,
'til shes reined it in looking,
for all of thy sighs.
Now that misting has gone
she's penning her tale.
As she reigns once again,
her words to unveil.

Lady Ollyne

Sir Knight Charles,

Each breath
from thine lips
whispers
of the sweetness,
within.

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

27 posted 2002-01-17 04:03 PM

My Lady - just had to come back to share with you once again how I love this writing...

BC

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

28 posted 2002-01-17 04:36 PM

Sir Alan, Sir JamesM,
Thank you for thy
viewing eyes.
This Lady reads thy
words and ~sighs.
Lady O

Lady Sings the Blues,
and is very appreciated
for her kindness, believe it.
Lovingly,
Lady Ollyne

Lady of the Midnitesun,
"...like softened
daylight moonbeams,"
thy words warm the chill
of a winter night.
~smiling
Lady O

Fallon dear,
Thank thee for thy
pleasing words.

Sir Knight of the Shadows,
"when morning takes it's first breath"
such lovely words, maybe a thought
for something new to pen for you.
"tis a pleasure to have your eyes
fall upon my heart words

Always,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Emily,
As beautiful as your heart,
are the words, as thine eyes touch.
*s

Lady Karilea,
"home... and writing"
after a long journey away.
Thank you,"warm one"
Lady O

Sir Craig,
Moonlight and roses,
shall send to thee
Warmth and colour
for thine eyes only do see.
Always,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Temptress,
Sighing is very healthy...
melting on the floor,
this Lady is not so sure of.
*s
Thanking thee for thy views,
Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-17-2002 07:57 PM).]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

29 posted 2002-01-17 05:26 PM

enjoyed

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

30 posted 2002-01-17 08:02 PM

Lady Floria,
From one romantic to another,
Thank you,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Rose,
Once or twice
your visits appreciated.
~Smiling,
Lady O

Sir Robert,
Flirting is allowed,
at least that's what one sees.
East Coast yes,
a visit would please.
You are armored well I think
One can hear
the sound of thy chink,
*teasingly,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Martie,
This Lady is pleased
by thy visit and words.
Romance is here to be read,
meaning heard.
Thank You,
Lady Ollyne

Sir Romeo,
Adoration of words
from thee, that are pure
allows for Knight Romeo
a visit and more.
*s

Sir William,
Once again my heart
speaks to you in
poetic whispers of
thanks.
Always,
Lady Ollyne

Lady Vandana,
thank you *s

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (01-17-2002 08:03 PM).]

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