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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-01-17 11:20 AM

If I let my love for you free
Would it change what is between you and I?
Would it put leaves on the trees?

How long can I go on loving you
If I answered today, tomorrow, and beyond
Would it bring my world into view?

Would the warmth of my love
Warm your heart
Like the sun above

If I got lost in your eyes ?
Would you allow me to find myself?
Or would you think it was a guise

I could only offer you a poor man’s roses
For I have very little else
But my love for you to dispose

I would give you a love of a lifetime
That would out live us both
If only you would accept this love of mine

A princess you would be
The queen of my life
Our love the world would see

The flame of our love would never go out
Just to look upon your face
Makes me realize that you I could not live without

To just sit with you by my side
Listening to some gentle music
Would be enough to keep the world on the outside

How long would my love last like this
Tell me how long you want it to last
Maybe today, tomorrow, and forever

Would that be long enough to suit you?

alan
01/17/02

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-01-17 11:25 AM

Today, tomorrow, forever.....in love these are such beautiful thoughts. Well done.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-17 11:29 AM

This sounds like a forever and ever kind of love. Very nicely written, Alan.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-01-17 12:02 PM

Alan - very nice poem, very nice words,
"Maybe today, tomorrow, and forever"

BC

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2002-01-17 12:08 PM

Ala,
Nicely done here.Hopefully today, tomorrow, and forever.
Peaches

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-17 03:10 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, these words come from your loving heart, a loving heart that is destined to love forever and ever! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

6 posted 2002-01-17 03:42 PM

Who's the lucky girl?
A poor mans' rose is rich in color like any other
to say nothing of the heart of gold.

[This message has been edited by mauddib (01-17-2002 03:44 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2002-01-17 04:02 PM

I would suggest giving
this to her. I know I'd love
it if I received something like this

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2002-01-17 10:57 PM

I have a question for you...would they be yellow roses?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

9 posted 2002-01-17 11:49 PM

I want to thank everyone for your time and your replies..
Paula.. there would be
4- red roses for respect
4- yellow for the joy I wish in your life
4-white for the purity of your friendship
and 4 pale blue ones for yoour friendship
which i still value highly

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2002-01-18 10:58 AM

I have always loved the roses sent to me , yes love like this does last an eternity
Hope

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