Open Poetry #18 |
Bluesy Guitar |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“BLUESY GUITAR” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Listen to the music, sexy it is, rhythm inside, wanting to sway… Eyes closed, can’t hold back, these chords, which I play… Standing on stage, looking out, someone, to catch my eye… Searching, hips moving around, sevenths, elevenths, to amplify… Dreamy inside, you’re there, body moving, as soft as you can… Thoughts drift, no words spoken, tonight, is where it all began… Your smile charms, you’ll wait, as I sing to you, one more bar… Now close to you on the floor, with you, and this bluesy guitar… ~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keep strummin those blues, BC. This is very good! Wish I could hear it in living audio. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Loving the blues BC. You write it well. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Well done! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,can you really play the guitar?This was very musical.I couldn`t resist. Juanita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ EXACTLY ~ This is just what my sweetie pie plays~ And I only have eyes for him when he performs~ Sooooo welcomed this morning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - I loves dem blues... Gentle Spirit - Nothing like listening to a sweet guitar playing them blues... Silver Streak - thank you for coming by... N orth Carolina Girl - yes I can play guitar, or rather I play at it. Love it, I do. And thanks for your reply... Marge - and a welcome this morning to you. And I know what you mean when your sweetie pie plays. Thanks for coming by.. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Keep playing, I can hear it in my mind.Such wonderful sounds. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! I love dem blues too! (giggles) Soooooo lovely and cute, sweet friend, your words always make me smile and sigh, this is soooooooo beautiful! May you forever strum chords of sweet melodies with your love in eternal happiness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ How wonderful....to hear sing, or play the blues.....I love the Music in this.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-17-2002 01:45 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - There's nothing like the blues to put the pink back in your cheeks. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy Mmmmm I could feel the music flowing darling boy. Absolutely excellent writing it has such wonderful movement. You could run your fingers over my strings anytime darling boy And then you’d really see a melody played Truly fabulous writing darling boy I really love it. This is another that is heading to my library. I hope you like it in there love Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ohhh I like this..I've always wanted to learn to play guitar and my friend Josh promised to give me lessons! |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
as I sing to you, one more bar…" This Lady seems to recall... and leaves you with a smile. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I love the guitar and I can just hear it. floria |
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