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Whispers |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Whispers Your whispers embrace my soul Caressing my every heart’s desire Connecting with my very core Sets my spirit on fire I long to feel your gentle touch Carry me away to other worlds That before you, I only dreamed of You set my heart free Give me a freedom I never knew Show me the path to happiness The road to pure contentment The way to bliss I yearn to feel your breath dance Across the soft the curve of my neck Hearing your words of undying love Whispers I need your arms around me Holding me close making me safe Chasing away all my fears and doubts Just loving me. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-17-2002 02:19 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is just sooooo warm and heartfelt! An excellent read! Bravo! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this flows so softly like a gentle whisper...I love the whole feel of it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful write babyT! HUGS and KISSES XOXOXo Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tara~This is very lovely....soft as a whisper. Enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. YOUR use of line and imagery is utterly outstanding You know that this is absolutely excellent don't you? I hope so YOU shine in this one love    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
What passionate beauty in this poem!!!! The words fairly dance across the heart. ****Ivy Rose |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Silver Streak - Thanks for stopping in, I'm glad you liked it. Morcastin - Thank you.Startime - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping in *hugs* Ter - Thank you dear *huggles*Enchantress - Thank you for coming into read, I'm glad you enjoyed. Marsha - Oh my Marsha.. You always make me blush.  Thank you for your warm compliments. You made me smile. *hugs*Ivy - Thank you so much for stopping in "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-16-2002 11:29 PM).] |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Rose. this is such a wonderful romantic poem. i loved it very much. isn't romance wonderful. great read. love Alice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - lovely write... Liked the words very much... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you loving words always sing with such romance and passion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true loves joy forever fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
What was it you were saying about your Muse .... A wonderful and well heard whisper. EXCELLENT!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
oooOOOoooOOOooooOO!! i had to answer this one even though i had to do it at work. (my phone is out) and my answer is: i love you too  -Dave |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I yearn to feel your breath dance Across the soft the curve of my neck I believe the music has begun. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Alice - I loveeeee romance I'm the biggest girly girl around LOL. Thanks for stopping in.Bill - Thank you It is good to see you here.Noah - Thank you my friend. I'm glad you liked it. Craig - Last night I stopped in the Passions chat room in MSN.. and what can I say .. they inspired me. Thank you for stopping in. I'm glad you liked it. vandana - Good Dave - Awwwwwww. I love you always. Duncan - You snuck in there on me..lol. Thank you for stopping in cowboy  I'm glad you liked."My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (01-17-2002 02:11 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love the thought of love whispers, this is wonderful.... HUGSLauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-17-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very seductive and passionate. Enjoyed. Cheryl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tara, you sure know how to get Dave's whispers to breathe on that curving neck. Well done! |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
cool stuff lady...smooooooth |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Rosepetals25, this is just lovely. floria |
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