Open Poetry #18 |
Freeing Depth |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Freeing Depth place your heart inside my hands let me breathe your breath a surface we have touched I want to know your depth let me into you much deeper places no one else is allowed to know I could soar along with your spirit oh, wont you let me go to caress another’s soul is embracing a total being knowing another inside most special kind of freeing "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
OKAY - ALL RIGHT ALREADY - I'm yours!! (have been for a long time - you just never looked). Really liked this, in case you're wondering... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (01-16-2002 07:54 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever melt with his heart and feel true happiness forever! (smiles) Love is the most beautiful freedom of all, we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* love taken to the deepest of depths it can go...now that is where love wants to be the most. Absolutely beautiful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Isn't it amazing how we really DO trust our hearts to those we love? This had such a warm, offering to it, Helen, very soft and tender write. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - your very romantic you know, as this writing shows... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful, Helen. I agree that nothing could be better. Sandra |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is the deepest our hearts and love will go.We all long for this.You are a great writer. Peaches |
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