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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-15 03:03 PM

Seduce Me

Seduce me with your thoughts
and ask me if you dare
Make bold upon the page
with passions you declare

Seduce me with your words
filled with your soul’s desire
Write fantasy for me
to set my heart on fire

Seduce me with your poems
with visions loud and clear
Of lovers who embrace
holding each other near

Seduce me with your kiss,
leaving burning trails
With whispers in my ear
to tell me the details

Seduce me with your touch
as love comes to a peak
Take all you wish and more
from words I’d have you speak

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-15 03:08 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the love of your dreams come and seduce you forever with the charm and enchantment of true love and happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-01-15 04:10 PM

Ooooh, very "seductive"...I enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-01-15 04:15 PM

Karen, You have captured my heart! I will write a poem just for you. Very soon.

-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-15 04:19 PM

Now, Karen, sweetheart, you know I have many poems like this in my
drawer but gee, you know, I'm a married woman (shhh) and cannot
share them with the world

No, seriously, I love this, it is VERY passionate. You go, girl!!!!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

5 posted 2002-01-15 04:21 PM

ummmm ..... errrrrrr ....

OK .... But I'll have to clear it with my wife first!!!!!!

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-01-15 04:24 PM

very seductive tale...love it, and who can resist such a wonderful invitation.

Charisma

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-15 05:27 PM

Oh Karen...you have gone and done it now...
Bet you have been eating oysters again...
you know that Passions has a high heat alarm
on poems submitted...WELL...the alarm is
going off right now...At least the one on
my comp. is...

NICE write...wheeweeeee...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2002-01-15 05:28 PM

ME TOOO! ME TOO! ROTFL! I LOVE this, Lady! Sure do miss this place!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-01-15 05:52 PM

Startime I love this, very upfront and to the point and wonderfully written, floria

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

10 posted 2002-01-15 06:02 PM

Karen
All I can say after reading it a second time is WOW!!!! I think the alarm is going off on my computer too! Really enjoyed your beautiful words.

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

11 posted 2002-01-15 06:17 PM

Very nice Startime.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-01-15 06:24 PM

Now that's an invitation to an interesting affair, Karen. Is your email server flooded yet? Romantic and sensual, Startime style.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2002-01-16 12:08 PM

Karen - I've read what I've read, I've seen what I've seen. I'm seduced with this....

BC

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

14 posted 2002-01-16 12:27 PM

Another flame-of-passion poem that does, indeed, seduce you. Great Writing, Dear Startime. ****Ivy Rose

Robert A
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

15 posted 2002-01-16 03:58 PM

GOD, okay, okay, I'm keeping a damp rag next to the computer, oh help! they're coming to take me away.....my breathing is shallow

I mean............great poem Startime!

Robert

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-01-16 04:13 PM

Karen~

WOW very sensual my friend....I especially love that last stanza....

HUGS

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2002 04:13 PM).]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

17 posted 2002-01-16 04:50 PM

Hello Karen
You captured the pure essense of love and desire in this wonderful piece of writing. I'll just have to read it again!
Take care......Sue

Suetang

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

18 posted 2002-01-16 05:02 PM

Very seductive!Hot and romantic.I'm sweating.

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

19 posted 2002-01-16 05:24 PM

O, Karen! ... O, Karen!Don't you know I have to get off the computer and go to the store?
O, Karen! ... what a wonderous fantasy you are to me ...
:---)
Jaime
... and if I had money ...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

20 posted 2002-01-16 05:40 PM

Seduce me with your words
filled with your soul’s desire
Write fantasy for me
to set my heart on fire

You don't know how tempting an invitation this is, Karen. Hmmmm...no, I must behave. I must!

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

21 posted 2002-01-16 05:52 PM

Startime dearest friend, this one is magnificient!!!You have penned a romantic pathway to your heart and lined that path with the most tempting of fruits!!!I have to get some air now, it's getting a little warm...(WINK)

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

22 posted 2002-01-16 05:54 PM

This is so good I can't stop smiling.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

23 posted 2002-01-16 05:56 PM

StarTime~
Delicately seductive ~
I LOVE IT~

**giggling wickedly**
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

24 posted 2002-01-16 07:48 PM

Oh Karen! Between you and Barry....well, you have managed to melt all the snow we had!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

25 posted 2002-01-17 11:23 AM

ah Karen, nothing like a good seduction....*w*
Wonderful hon.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

26 posted 2002-01-17 11:55 AM

This could seduce anyone into anything.Nicely done.
Peaches

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