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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Drown in your fear the last full daylight ending Dance till you bleed the answer comes and your forgotten Language comes from anger that trips you and leaves you hanging The words have lost all meaning but the tempo is still your heat beating The fullest of minds quenches not one thirst Yet you catch the last glimpse of a breaking soul Just to find the second meaning chances are gone for that Hold tight to your salvation its that sight of wisdom you want back. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Drown in your fear the last full daylight ending Dance till you bleed the answer comes and your forgotten Language comes from anger that trips you and leaves you hanging The words have lost all meaning but the tempo is still your heat beating The fullest of minds quenches not one thirst Yet you catch the last glimpse of a breaking soul Just to find the second meaning chances are gone for that Hold tight to your salvation its that sight of wisdom you want back." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lots here, I feel that to catch a glimpse of any soul is something we all strive for. This is an indepth read. 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* been there a few times...hopefully I have learned the lessons and cannot be drawn into it again. Well said. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) So very sad but well-said, sweet friend, His love will never fail us and I hope we all can achieve salvation and escape from grief and anger and find joy to replace the wounds! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a wonderful expression of the heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This write is a wonderful example of your endless talents and makes my new year. Love, me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yet you catch the last glimpse of a breaking soul Just to find the second meaning chances are gone for that Hold tight to your salvation its that sight of wisdom you want back. Can we ever get any of it back?? I hope this New Year is a Good one for you.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Amazingly crafted work. I iked this very much. |
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