Open Poetry #18 |
Love Through Nature |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I bloom just like a flower In the garden of your love I become the brightest star In your constellation high above How recklessly I dive Into your sensual sea Such enormous waves of desire Seem to wash right over me You're my oasis in the desert Such a welcoming sight you are I have climbed the peaks of your passion And wished upon your shooting star You're the pillow where I lay After travelling many paths You and I together have discovered The finest love to forever last Suetang |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Beautiful images and a full expressive poem that anyone would be honored to receive in referencre to their impact on a nother person. Thanks for putting this up for me to enjoy. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (smiles) It makes me so happy to feel your joy of truly found love in your words, may He forever lie beside you and be the pillow at night that makes you dream happily! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you truly are a Queen of Romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually stunning. I love the way your wrote this poem using nature. Absolutely magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Suetang, Awwwwwww. I really like this Enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Dynamic! You are so good. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love nature and I love reading words like this about love, about tieing it all in together. I can't wait for spring! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lovely images.Nice job! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I bloom just like a flower In the garden of your love Sigh... A beautifully romantic write Most enjoyed. ~Angel of darkness~ |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You're the pillow where I lay After travelling many paths You and I together have discovered The finest love to forever last I liked the last stanza best. I am also seek someone to share a path with special blessings for both. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sue,I really liked the way you describe this love.Here is a flower for you and your great poem. Juanita |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your beautiful and inspiring words. Juanita, how very thoughtful you are and thank you so much for the beautiful flower. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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