Open Poetry #18 |
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Love's Window |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
If I touch back to Yesterday To you, delight, and words that play To whispers echoed in the night To dancing close in candle's light I hear a song of love so true that so long after carried through Of standing by in quiet's pain when one slipped down lost in the rain For even if a love is true There is a window of time for two And should that chance slip by before you join hands in love's adore It's gone with only remembered pain A song I'd like to hear again |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sad sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend! Your loving heart will hear this song again, and you will sing with true happiness forever and gaze through loves window with love close to your heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunset, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sad and beautifully written! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
memories are wonderful but also they can be bad.. this poem is a wonderful write. alan |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunSet~ This is delicately lovely~ 'A song I'd like to hear again' WONDERFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sunset, Never fret about a Sunset Just arise To a new sunrise. Very beautiful poem. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so sad but so true...sometimes we wait too long and miss the chance love offered us. My heart felt this poem. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
Thank you so much, Noah and sodpossom, you are both very kind. ![]() Alan, that is very true. Thank you! Marge, thank you for a very high compliment. ![]() And Silver Streak, thank you so much for your words. They left me with a smile. |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is wonderful Sunset. I've found that sometimes the window closes, and sometimes, it's left open for that time. Beautiful poem, I've enjoyed reading your work thus far. |
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