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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-01-16 01:51 AM

You are the Sun.
You are the Sea.
You are the whisper
inside of me.

The silence of the night
screams your name.
The absence of your light
is my bane.

The clouds shout your love,
and envelope me as a glove,
a custom fit.
Is this what LOVE is all about?
Is this why I scream and shout
your name in my sleep?

Your heart and soul
I want to keep,
next to mine.
My mind has no answers.
Only questions.

Do you hear the same?
Do you cry out my name?
Is my heart within yours
tonight,
My starlight?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-16-2002 01:55 AM).]

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-16 03:37 AM

Oh I would bet you are the twinkle in someone else's eye this night and most other nights! Well done Kacy, just lovely.

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-01-16 06:25 AM

Ah what a twinkle I'm seeing Kacy. Beautiful write. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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3 posted 2002-01-16 08:09 AM

                                                  You are the Sun.
                                                  You are the Sea.
                                                 You are the whisper
                                                    inside of me.

                                                The silence of the night
                                                 screams your name.
                                               The absence of your light
                                                     is my bane.
=====================================================

Well this is a wonderful mix of rhyme and ache....
such sincere longing put in lovely poetic phrases and questions.
So good to see your name here, seems like its been a bit...but then with my comp probs Im missing a lot...

I love this line:

"You are the whisper inside of me.

thats a *sigh* just waiting to happen

well done Poetess Kacy

Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin
Always someone marches brave, here beneath my skin
Constant Craving ... has always been.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-16 08:24 AM

(smiles) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always see the twinkle in his eye and feel true love everyday as the stars dance with you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-16 08:32 AM

Kathleen, this is hauntingly romantic!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2002-01-16 08:54 AM

You are my moon
my stars
from my heart
you are never very far

Kacy... I do love your style. Great write.
alan

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

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GA

7 posted 2002-01-16 09:14 AM

Really good!

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

8 posted 2002-01-16 09:39 AM

Midnitesun, Very well written. I love the emotion that flows from this. Enjoyed. Cheryl

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-01-16 09:44 AM

Midnitesun,
A loving write and a delight. *L*

Greeneyes

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Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-01-16 10:11 AM

When you can feel someone in any element, or any whisper....it's love....beautiful....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2002 10:14 AM).]

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

11 posted 2002-01-16 10:20 AM

Yes! This is so good I just loved it! Especially the opening part:

You are the Sun.
You are the Sea.
You are the whisper
inside of me.

I thought that this was just so beautiful, great job!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Martie

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California

12 posted 2002-01-16 10:43 AM

Midnite--Such a romantic write..wonderful!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

13 posted 2002-01-16 11:02 AM

Thank you, my wonderful Passions family. I am glad that you all seemed to enjoy reading this poem. Those opening lines just fell straight from the sky, I was just the lucky one to catch them and share them. Hugs to all. And a GIANT HUG to Ron and Athena! Without this site, this poem might never have been penned.

strbbux
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Posts 3859

14 posted 2002-01-16 11:36 AM

Midnite, this is a wonderfully romantic poem . floria

Midnitesun

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Gaia

15 posted 2002-01-16 01:42 PM

Floria, thank you so much for reading, and for the reply.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

16 posted 2002-01-16 04:43 PM

" My mind has no answers. Only questions."
I have a question ...
... may I wish upon this fantastic star?

If such words fall from the sky,
I am going to carry my umbrella
upside down for now on.

Another beautiful write Kacy.

Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

17 posted 2002-01-16 04:46 PM

very touching poem with a lot of emotions clearly communicated

Startime
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Canada

18 posted 2002-01-16 05:08 PM

*sigh* anything with stars in it captures my attention....this poem is a masterpiece of heartfelt emotion. I am sure he can hear your yearning call. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
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Posts 723
N.C

19 posted 2002-01-16 05:10 PM

Very beautiful and romantic!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

20 posted 2002-01-16 05:21 PM

MidniteSun~

Beautifully, beautifully done~

'You are the Sun.
You are the Sea.
You are the whisper
inside of me.

Do you hear the same?
Do you cry out my name?
Is my heart within yours
tonight,
My starlight?'

I love this *gift* that you caught~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

21 posted 2002-01-16 05:52 PM

I can see them now.

Perfectly done.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

22 posted 2002-01-16 06:54 PM

Startime, I knew you'd enjoy this.

Canuckster, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Craig, LOL, maybe we should all carry upside down umbrellas. Thanks for your comments.

Marge, thank you. I am glad you liked this.

Sodpossom, glad you enjoyed the read.

Romeo, thank you for reading and commenting.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

23 posted 2002-01-16 07:26 PM

Just loved the way this F
                                    E
                                        L
                                           L
                                               from the sky, me friend....

jwesley

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

24 posted 2002-01-16 07:53 PM

Love this, Kacy. You make the feelings very clear and strong.
Sandra

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

25 posted 2002-01-16 08:47 PM

Do you hear the same?
Do you cry out my name?
Is my heart within yours
tonight,
My starlight?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh Kacy Kacy!!!! This is sooooo good!
I just love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

26 posted 2002-01-16 08:50 PM

Jwesley, thanks, and I just love the way you replied.

Sandra, thank you, some days the words flow easily.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

27 posted 2002-01-16 08:53 PM

Hey, Nancy. Thanks! I've never found Love as easy to write about as Nature, but lately it seems to flow at will from my quill.

Magnus

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Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

28 posted 2002-01-16 08:57 PM

Kacy...this is beautiful...Yes..we all like
to have a star in our night...seems to have
been that way since childhood...

Midnitesun

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Gaia

29 posted 2002-01-16 09:10 PM

Magnus, I remember saying the starlight, starbright verse when I was very little. But by the time I was in my thirties, I stopped wishing. And then all of a sudden one of my old wishes came true! Now I have a wonderful teenage daughter, and lately I've started wishing again.

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