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Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-15 06:24 PM

I've Dreamed Of You For So Long, My Love
By: Noah Eaton
1/15/02

I've dreamed of you for so long, my love
I never thought anyone would ever love me
I thought I might as well sacrifice myself
Who would ever want a foolish boy like me?

Then before I knew it, I found the most perfect love
She is an angel, the one I've always dreamed of
She's the one I want to hold so badly
She is all I ever wanted, cooing to my heart like a dove

I am always so very happy with her
She is all I wanted for Christmas, she is all I wanted my whole life
She is who I want to rest with every night
I dream of her being my angelic future wife

She gave to me a souvenir, a loves sweet treasure
Symbolized as an angel, chanting like a music box softly
Tears came to my face, I never heard a sound so heavenly
I wanted to kiss you so badly, I wanted to hold you dearly

Then my dreams shattered, the gift fell from my hands
Smashing on the cold ground in tear-jerking crash
My heart has broken, all my love is gone
I'm just a broken angel with a broken heart, shattered and thrashed

I fall to my knees, holding the broken pieces in my arms
Flooding in tears looking into her gorgeous sweet face
Reminding me of a love I could have had
That I wanted so badly, that my parents and distance stood in the way

I cry, bellowing
"I just wanted to hold her,
I just wanted to kiss her,
I just wanted to love her!"

I've dreamed of you for so long, my love
Now my love is all stolen and gone
Here I sit in silence, nobody loves me
A shattered lover with everything but unheard poetry lost

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-15-2002 06:24 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-15 06:25 PM

This is bittersweet, and sad Noah, and I hope you find your partner one day, and that love will be yours forever. Lovely poem. floria

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-01-15 06:38 PM

Noah, Oh this is so sad. Take heart dear one, love is never really far away. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

3 posted 2002-01-15 06:44 PM

Aw Noah, these tears that you weep, many have felt.  Wip these tears away my friend, as you will meet the love of your life, trust me.  Nicely written poem, I liked it.

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-01-16 12:19 PM

Noah - such a sad poem you write from such a lovely warm heart. You are loved Noah my friend, never forget that....

BC

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

5 posted 2002-01-16 12:29 PM

*sigh* oh sweet Noah, my heart goes out to you....such pain and sadness....**big big hugs** Just know you are truly loved by many...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-01-16 06:29 AM

very poignant write Noah, but sweetie we all love ya too. Well written express of feelings.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
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7 posted 2002-01-16 09:19 AM

Lost love...I've felt it before
Excellent Noah.

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

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8 posted 2002-01-16 09:29 AM

Noah, this is so tender and sad. It's lovely poetry but I'm not sure if it's personal or just well written. Either way, you've done a great job of expressing yearning and loss. I hope it's not the real feelings of your heart. You are too kind to feel such pain. Cheryl

N orth Carolina Girl
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NC,USA

9 posted 2002-01-16 09:41 AM

Noah,so very sad

Hang tight my friend love is on its way.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

10 posted 2002-01-16 10:07 AM

Oh, Noah!

( This is soooo sad and beautiful! It reminds of Romeo and Juliet... star-crossed lovers. It made my heart ache with the love and pain that was so well expressed in this! You, sweet Noah, have a beautiful heart, and we all love you so much! Remember that always! And keep your chin up, things do work out in ways we cannot always see and understand from the start. It's true, hindsight IS 20/20. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt read with us!

Love,
Bonnie

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sodpossom
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11 posted 2002-01-16 10:11 AM

Beautiful and bittersweet!

Greeneyes

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12 posted 2002-01-16 10:18 AM

Noah~

You are so young, love will find you....and you will find love....be well...Peace...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-16-2002 10:18 AM).]

Ariana
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Orlando, Florida

13 posted 2002-01-16 10:59 AM

Noah:
"I cry, bellowing"
"I just wanted to hold her,
I just wanted to kiss her,
I just wanted to love her

Just remember that we all love you. Such a sad poem coming from a wonderful heart. I needed lots of kleenex. Very emotional words.

Robert A
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Posts 174

14 posted 2002-01-16 03:57 PM

young man, never let loose of this, you have what I once had, it is an honor to read a poet like you, yeah, a real honor.

Robert

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

15 posted 2002-01-16 09:08 PM

Noah, In time, you will meet the perfect girl you've always dreamed of! I know you will! You make my heart flutter for sure.

RP

DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

16 posted 2002-01-24 06:10 PM

aww that poem was so sad *wipes tears from eyes* *big hugs* sad but very loevly
*hugs* and *kisses*
byes!
Tifferz

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