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Open Poetry #18
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nichole2005
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since 2002-01-04
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0 posted 2002-01-15 02:24 PM

Lost souls
Hoping for survival
Once a love so strong
Never thought to be broken
Now drifting away
Down the river of love
To open and spread
Into the lake of life
Once unknown
Now discovered
They come together
Like blended colors
Taken under
Once lost
Now found
A love stayed true
To the belover
Sweet sound that came
Sweet taste so bitter
Enlightened that day
Now darkened by night
Will they float
Together like always
Nobody knows
Where fate will take them
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1 posted 2002-01-15 02:29 PM



YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, there's no feeling more happier than losing oneself in rapture to loves beauty! (smiles) May true love forever fill your heart and have you lost in eternal joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet nichole, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
nichole2005
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2 posted 2002-01-15 02:37 PM

Thank you all! You all have been so sweet to me. I just love sharing my work with all of you. I hope you enjoy and thak you thank you so much for reading my work and telling me what you think. Right now I am in a great relationship and I am so inspired by him to write so I plan on sharing all of my work one day at a time!
Hypnosis
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3 posted 2002-01-15 02:42 PM

Yes, there is no greater feeling than that of love.  I hope it comes to fill you with happiness and joy.  Beautifully written too I should say!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.
Decaflame
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4 posted 2002-01-30 03:49 PM


Nothing better than a good relationship to spice up a poet...enjoyed!
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5 posted 2002-01-30 06:32 PM

I love the last 2 lines of your poem, it is sooo true!
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6 posted 2002-01-30 08:15 PM

"Now drifting away
Down the river of love
To open and spread
Into the lake of life"

I really like that line.
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