Open Poetry #18 |
Smiling Eyes |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Smiling Eyes Don't turn those smiling eyes Into a frown Don’t let your tears settle the dust I know you are down Don’t leave your hopes and dreams Upon barren ground But just take a few minutes today And look at you through my eyes Look at you the way I do For my eyes see a friend to my friend I offer my hand Let me help you up when the world Lets you down Maybe one day I’ll be the one in need Then maybe you be the one that’s around Reaching down to help me up So take my hand maybe then We can help each other To a better end © alan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alan - great write, and very true. It's really nice to have a friend to help when one is in need. And to be able to do the same for them.... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
To let our smile die and close our eyes to all the goodness that surrounds us is a tragedy indeed. Me must pick ourselves up and hold our heads high, least we miss all the happiness in our lifetime. I was especially moved by the sincerity in your words. Your friend is lucky to have you. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Bill.. thank you for your time to read and reply Blue.. I am the lucky one to have the friends that i do... thank you for your reply [This message has been edited by Alan (01-15-2002 07:52 AM).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sending you a little smile, my friend. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Your friend is so lucky alan , this was so touching Hope |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Dee ... I can always use a smile or a friendly word just like anyone else...thank you little lady Hope... This poem is directed to nor about anyone in particular. I am glad you like it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Alan, we're ever so lucky to have such a loving friend like you, just as all your loved ones are so fortunate to have someone to help them when they need it the most with your compassion! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your warm heart reaches out to all your friends in this fabulpus poem, we all love you so much! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is marvelous! Friends really can make all the difference. ;o) I greatly enjoyed reading this! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan, this is a wonderful uplifting read this morning! Thank you for this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Noah my friend thank you for your kind comments. Mort... It is good to see you here. Thank you for taking the time to read this. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Alan, This a very nice poem about friendship. We should all be there for each other always. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Chris.... thank you Vandana... I am glad you liked it.... thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alan, We can always help each other to a better end. Enjoyed the write. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
hopeful words....very hopeful words....I hope someone hears you |
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