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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Skipped Heartbeats By: Noah Eaton 1/14/02 Butterflies in my stomach flitter Your soft warm lips quiver Our fantasies softly tremble Finding true happiness in your romantic fables You suckle the ambrose glaze from my lips As I taste the luscious honey from yours in kismet kiss Tears fall, shining with joys intricacy Breathing the perfume of your goddess potpourri Caressing the flare of your caramel body Slowly kissing your flesh, feeling your warmth so happily Fondling you with touches of cashmere Sighing in ecstasy, knowing you are here Melting together in passions lustrous sunbeam Our hearts welding together, skipping heartbeats Sharing one gorgeous melody to last a lifetime Making love to each other in spiritual delight [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-14-2002 11:10 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - what can I say that I haven't already said my friend. Such loving words from you... BC |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This so beautiful....very lovely write!! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Noah, you really have so much to give.... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
tempting descriptions Noah..nicely done.  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh, so beautiful Noah, this brings a tear to my eye. You suckle the ambrose glaze from my lips As I taste the luscious honey from yours in kismet kiss I loved these two lines the best in this. This was soo beautifully written, great job! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Another beautiful love poem, Noah! This one is absolutely delicious.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. The flow and the rhythm are utterly excellent. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ooooh this is a keeper! Let me tell you my 2 fav lines were "Tears fall, shining with joys intricacy Breathing the perfume of your goddess potpouri" Gosh, I 've learned so much from you, thank you for being my inspiration honey!  RP |
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