Open Poetry #18 |
what stands before us all? |
woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
I've become old in the Quest for the dreams of youth. The gray hair is there and less to complain of the change. When did all this happen? While I was looking down? Shoulders bent unto the task. This good worker stood ready. To defend the ethics of honor and of right. Ready to fight. To do the best for. And there the question lies. What was all this for? Have I reached one single open door? All locked tight and battened down. This paths for others, you go round. And what of that one and clearly open door? It stands before us all. There in, once again, lies the question we should attend. Why we, while slamming clambering stammering scrapping to be first. Could ever, really, for victory, dare thirst. Would it not more gracious seem? To carress the moments. Aloft in dreams. Maybe clouds can teach our way? For if it's rain. What matters day? Or night or land or sea. Float on by and rain it will be. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Deep thoughts are flowing in these words...the questions we all ask at different times in our lives are put forth here...I wonder do we ever find the answer...Great writing. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh I really like this one, and it's a powerful thought provoking theme. A novel approach to carpe diem. BRAVO! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Woodtic, this is wonderful. It really made me think. It is powerful and full of questions. floria |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
I liked this ponderous piece! It was really thought provoking! Well done! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
yes very thought-provoking. I love poems that allow me to do some thinking! good poem RP |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Thank you all for your kind comments. |
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