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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-14 06:30 PM

We leave bits and pieces
behind
Occupying places
we had rather have left
blank
Denying ourselves
the opportunity to shine
Declining love
when we felt it was too hard
to grasp
Ending up empty
when there is
still space inside

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-14 06:35 PM

(sigh) Such a sad but beautiful poem, sweet friend, sometimes love is just too hard to handle, but there will always ve a love that feels so comfortable and heavenly and will not leave bits and pieces of joy but fill an entire heart with happiness! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, as always you express such sheer love and emotion in your fabulous words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Canuckster
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since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

2 posted 2002-01-14 07:21 PM

Walker,

I enjoyed reading this piece. THanks for the wisdom and the read.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-14 07:39 PM

yes, people deny a lot don't they? This is an effective read.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-01-14 07:51 PM

your poems always speak in volumes of truth!
(hugs)

RP

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-01-14 07:53 PM

Nothing worth having comes easy. In the end, it is usually worth the effort. Nice work.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-14 07:53 PM

Oh WOW!!!There is much wisdom in these words..Very well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2002-01-14 07:56 PM

How very true this is!

Cor

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