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Without a Word |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
He wanted her And she knew it She wanted him too But she couldn't find the words to say it She couldn't think of a way to express it So she hesitated She waited And even though she feared in time she would loose him... Still she said nothing And nothing was done What if she read him wrong? What if she told him only to be made a fool of? To be laughed at, humilated Was it really worth the risk? "Yes, Yes!" Her heart cried "No, No!" Her mind chanted She took in the exquisite details of his face and found him marvelous. He was a mystery And she was Holmes determined to find the key to unlock his secrets She wondered if some things were better left unsaid Do all things need to be spoken? If he truly wanted her Couldn't he see the desire in her eyes? Didn't he know that his touch brings peace of mind And desire to her? Must all things be spoken? Can't they just be learned...Without a word? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo well-said, sweet friend, I hope that they can both see the love in each others eyes and have the courage and faith to express their love to one another, for falling in love is the most beautiful feeling in the whole world and they deserve the greatest happiness! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet J.K, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I don't think he could help but see the desire that burns in your eyes...sometimes it is good not to let our feelings show at other times not so good....there doesn't seem to be an answer to this one...I want to say be bold and let him know your interest but I have done that and known also the feeling of rejection when one reaches out. I guess only you can decide if you want to take that chance. You have written about it so well you have me questioning myself. BRAVO!!!Great writing. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Both the written word and the spoken word can hold so many powers. It's true that some things are better left unsaid but in the affairs of the heart I think you should tell that special someone how they feel and you may be pleasantly surprised. I enjoyed your words very much and look forward to more. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, I think they can....but I believe in saying it, so I know they know..... I like this with all that you are... |
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