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Open Poetry #18

Did you ever Dream.

Ven
Member

since 2001-10-01

Posts 102
U.K.

0 posted 2002-01-14 08:52 AM

Did you ever dream.

Did you ever dream of infinite nothing,
of a black and empty void.
Did you ever wake up shaking,
cold sweat beading,
on your rose flushed skin.
Afraid to open your eyes,
Too scared to let reality in.

Did you ever dream you were awake,
that all your fears were truth,
Did you ever see the demons,
empty eyed
and full of mortal sin,
sitting at your bedside
Did you know, you'd let them in ?

Did you ever dream that you had died,
and never more would wake.
Did you ever see the inside,
of your casket
with its silk and satin lining
and feel the claustrophobia,
as they gently screwed you in.

Did you ever wake with the morning sun
and think, "today's the day".
Did you ever open up your heart
and let it lead,
Just trusting fate to win
and give to you a locking box,
to put your nightmare's in.

by Ven.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-01-14 10:15 AM

yes, yes, and more of yes

good write

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

2 posted 2002-01-14 10:28 AM

I understand.
Excellent.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-14 10:49 AM

I dream all the time, but not like this. I like the idea of having a locking box, though...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-14 03:03 PM

(smiles) I always dream, but not like this, this is sooooooo very well said, sweet friend! Your imagery and voice is always such a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lorraine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-01-14 03:12 PM

Yes to all of the thoughts you pondered in this one! Matter fact, I had an ugly nightmare last night *sigh*

RP

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-14 04:03 PM

Ven, you know I love this, it is wonderful. floria

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