Open Poetry #17 |
Another Time |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
In a parallel universe in another place and time when he was mine grass was a brilliant green the wine glass overflowed and roses smelled of love instead of death But that was there,and this is here and I have only this time to live in somehow. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and live you will. . . for we must exist in the time that we're in. . . not in the time that we were. . . excellent Sandra. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great truth in letting the past go and allowing the present to be with you... that you might see the future ahead of you and not look back.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, this is strong, this is good...Sandra, real good Kathleen |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In another time ... The grass another shade of green, your looking glass half full, roses sent unseen, a time compatible. That was then, it is now, life to live somehow. The past must be passed for the future to begin. <<< *s* >>> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And live you will Sandra! ...may you walk with a song in your heart and a smile on your face! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Sandra, you will, for your lovely heart is destined to fly into this special world again and embrace true love eternally! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words always touch my heart deeply! (smiles) Love shall flitter its wings in your heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Walk into the brilliance of your future and let the sparkle back into your eyes. A new time awaits you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a great poem well expressed. if you ever need anyone to talk to or anything at all i'm here email me heck i'll even give you my number. hope all things work out and i'm here for you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and, lil sis, you will find that when you close that door to the past, a new future awaits you.......look for an email tomorrow!! The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The grass is still green...well somewhat faded from season..the glass is still there...(They) are at a loss for not being there with you. And you...you are still a wonderful Lady!!! Very worthy of a grand toast! I think I will To Sandra..a Lady of heart and poetry and gifts just waiting to be opened! Sincerely, Regina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Perhaps in another time on another plane, he will be yours again. Intriguing thoughts, Sandra. All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
In a parallel universe in another place and time when he was mine ------------ Wonderful Sandra....& soooo heart touching. Thank you Take care dear friend... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A toast, indeed, for a very special lady! And a map to explore those other dimensions... (let me know when you find a portal). There are many more adventures ahead... -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured the depth and dimension of this ponder beautifully Sandra. much enjoyed your expression in this piece ... big hugs. Best wishes, /Kit |
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