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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-11-28 01:17 AM

A Little Bit of Eternity

Can't seem to
find the place
where I fit
into her heart.

Don't understand
the obstacles
that keep
us apart.

Someday I hope
all these secrets
will be revealed
to me.

Hopefully our hearts
will blend together
perfectly

so we
can share hearts
thru a little bit
of eternity.

JamesLee
November27
2001

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-28 01:20 AM

there you go James,

making me sigh

You are such a thoughtful and romantic man

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-28 01:23 AM

Such romantic words and thoughtfullness from a man.May you find the same in return.
Peaches

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-11-28 01:28 AM

a little bit, sometimes thats all, thats needed to be.....I so enjoyed this......

Greeneyes~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-11-28 01:29 AM

A heart...and eternity!! Is there anything more magical? I hope you find it James

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-11-28 01:36 AM

"Don't understand
the obstacles
that keep
us apart."

Is it any easier when you know what the reasons are? I don't know, sometimes, I think it's best to leave it and not ask. SIGH, but what do I know? NADA.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-11-28 07:10 AM

James,

I like this, as I always do with your poetry

Nice write.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-11-28 08:49 AM

James I love this! Leave it to you to make me sigh so early in the morning.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-28 12:14 PM

now you're finding it James. . . yes. . .

wonderful my friend. . . the answers are there. . .

----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-11-28 12:21 PM

Sweet man, you shouldn't have to fit in anywhere. Her heart should just open wide and invite you to fill it. You always leave me sighing with your words. You are such a loving romantic. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

10 posted 2001-11-28 12:29 PM

James, you touch my heartstrings in this beautiful poem...
Hugs2uSweetie
*~coco~*

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

11 posted 2001-11-29 05:24 PM

James, I always love to read from your heart, as it is always a feast for my eyes...

...you are me, I am you, we are one...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-11-29 05:37 PM

nice

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