Open Poetry #17 |
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Peace |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
Peace Peace. Something that should be surrounding us all. My heart weeps for the State of war that we now find ourselves in.Tears flow for the people Trapped in the nightmares of this new war. My heart aches for the innocent souls that will suffer with death and loss. It’s strange that the one thing that we are fighting for, is the thing that we are avoiding… Peace. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, I know, I know, and it breaks my heart to see this happen. (tears fall down my cheeks) I pray we can all have the heart to help make love and peace possible everywhere and cherish and be thankful for what we have; each other and life. (big hugggsssssss) I join you in your prayers, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Sooooo sad but well-written, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is perfect for these troubled times Tara... spoken with sincerety and hope ... and lovely in its impressive presentation. very cool ... well done poetess RP ![]() You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Yes ... a most effective piece for our time. Well expressed!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful. Your words and the way you have presented it are truly a gem of priceless value. I love it!!! I love it!!! I hope we get the message. ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Stop you for stopping in. It is sad..the way things in the world is going. There shouldn't have to be a war on terrorism. Terrorism shouldn't be. Janet - It is a pleasure to see you here ![]() ctowen - Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed ![]() Startime - I hope people get the message too. Thanks for stopping in and replying ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Yes, peace and freedom. Nice work, Tara. Big *hugs* to you, my friend. ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So very true indeed. Peace is what is needed most. Well done! ![]() All writing comes |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"fighting for peace"....a phrase used for thousands of years....wouldn't you think by now someone would realize the contradiction in terms? ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
all too true, honey, unfortunately... you know my feelings on this topic. for those of you who don't, my idea of how war should be approached is that we ought to have each side declare a list of what they want if they win, then take all the people above the rank of lieutenant colonel (or the equivalent) from each army and lock 'em in a room together, unarmed. whoever walks out gets their whole list, and the ones left unconscious get squat. the soldiers get to watch on video cameras and bet on the outcomes, and any losses will be recouped from the combatants' salaries. that would clear up this "war" crap in a real hurry. failing that, lock 'em in a room with ME. when i walk out, there won't be any more of this foolishness. -Dave |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I guess I wanted to be reminded of that feeling today, thank you for this. Kathleen (Kay) |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Always been this way. Waves ceaselessly crashing against each other sharing the same sea. Enjoyed. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I wish we could have world peace...Only God knows if and when we will get that! Tara, you are such a loving woman (hugs) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just doesn't make sense does it? But then again, it never did. Wonderful write and fitting for not only these times of turmoil but for all times. Truely appreciated and enjoyed much. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Let there be Peace on earth" this reminds me of that beautiful song, and the is so touching for the holidays....thank you...but sadly peace is hard to find these days.....there is hope though....hugs... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for this. Both the presentation and the thoughts are wonderful. And even though I do not expect to see world peace in my lifetime, I will not stop hoping and believing that it will happen some day. But then my daughter reminded me of what happened in a Simpsons TV show...Peace on Earth became a reality, then the aliens showed up and took over the planet. LOL. I had to add that. Please forgive me. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How true! You are a very compassionate person ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I'm glad I did stop in today.. I didn't think I'd see this poem back up on the pages. Thank you everyone for comments. I pray there will be peace soon, even though I do support the reason for the war. Hopefully, it will end soon. Thank you all again for the responses, I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not feeling well, and not staying long, or I would take the time to thank you all individually. ![]() ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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