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Moonlight Reverie
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Moonlight Reverie |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Moonlight Reverie  Moon shines down through spiral of clouds Creating a tunnel effect, pulling Her heart he strokes As the gentle rays coax Into this night, this biting cold She breathes frost heavy air Seductively, he holds her there Bathing her in false warmth Thankfully, not yet full This night, it would be too much She would give in to his cries, His soft lunar sighs With heavy feet, distraught mind Struggling against inner tides She turns self, hides Refusing his plea Glimmering he waits Knowing soon she will succumb When at last he rounds with radiance She will honor him in reverence ~SEA~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very lovely, Sea.... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ Oh wow this is so stunning.....you write beautifully... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
"Lovely" is the word ...  regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where have YOU been..this is a beautifully crafted piece..I admire it and you. I shall save this one, I believe *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, You get better and better with each poem you write chickie  This is simply beautiful. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
As usually another great write. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
This is beautiful, you've capture the rapture of the moon, Sweet dreams. Joe |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Glimmering he waits Knowing soon she will succumb When at last he rounds with radiance She will honor him in reverence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful writing here Susan! Love it...I do!! hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
he hangs in the sky waiting the fade of resolve romance is afoot Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ thank you Greeneyes~ goodness, thanks! Sudhir lyer~ thank you Wynter~ you are so nice, thank you Tara~ so do you! thanks Bernie~ so sweet, thank you Joe~ hi and welcome to Pip and thank you Nancy~ you are awesome, thank you Lunatic~ wow, that is beautiful, thank you ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes...I can only concur with the above ... stunning and lovely in its imagery and flow. beautiful write Sea. jm he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You KNOW you've captured me in this one~ Lovely lady ... just lovely~ 'Glimmering he waits Knowing soon she will succumb When at last he rounds with radiance She will honor him in reverence' Deeply felt *sighs* *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sea, very, very lovely.... ever deep...runs |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my, I love this poem. It is as if the moon is for you alone. How absolutely delightful. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very well done...as usual... you have captured a great deal.... I enjoyed! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . a unique telling of the close of day, and the opening of night. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- Ah, yes...this is simply beautiful. Love the thoughts you've penned here, and the feeling they leave behind. Wonderfully penned. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, Your writing is truly amazing and you only seem to get better and better with each new poem you write. I love this, sweetie, and it goes in my library. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This was incredibly easy to get caught up in. It inspired many thoughts...wish it was earlier, I'd love to write them. Excellent write, Susan. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This would make a nice Christmas card...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Susan, this is absolutely stunning....love it very, very much |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh, THIS is beautifuL!   Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wow, SEA wonderful stylish write, much enjoyed, I am as usual in awe. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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