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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2001-11-27 09:56 PM

Looking up to the heavens on a moonless night.
Stars casting down a shadow, as they shine so bright.
It's time to unwind the thoughts in my mind.
And put down on paper for me to find.

So many thoughts bleeding out from my pen.
Revisiting visions from way back when.
It took a while for me to see,
The things you did, you did them for me.

Remembering memories of days long gone,
Lifts my spirit and fills my heart with a song.
You are the best friend that I have ever had.
You made me laugh, yet held me when I was sad.

My emotions drift back to a warm safe place.
Where you nurtured and cared within your embrace.
So now I'll give back to you what you once gave to me.
For to me you are so special and always will be.

As you shuffle slowly across the ground.
Your feeble legs are now slowing you down.
I see you struggling from day to day.
I'll be right here beside you all the way.

I will cherish the precious time I have with you.
And make more memories to last a lifetime through.
While the clocks and calendars have begun to show your age.
I fear tomorrow you may not be here to turn the page.

But when the fire finally goes out,
An angel you will be, without a doubt.
And when I hear my name, whispered in the gentle wind.
I know you will be watching over me, once again.

** Revised 11/26/01

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-11-27 10:38 PM

You are lucky to have such a special friend. Everyone needs a good friend to be there for them to help smooth out life's bumpy road.
Hold onto this special someone!! : )

RP

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-27 10:43 PM

This was absolutely lovely writing.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

3 posted 2001-11-27 11:00 PM

Lovely writng and what a great friend to have.
Peaches

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-27 11:11 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-27 11:15 PM

This is a stunning work of art from a heart filled with love for someone special. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-11-27 11:27 PM

"My emotions drift back to a warm safe place.
Where you nurtured and cared within your embrace.
So now I'll give back to you what you once gave to me.
For to me you are so special and always will be."

That is so tender and loving, and the way it should be between friends, and family.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-11-28 07:08 PM

This makes me cry, so full of love, and the knowledge of loss to come. I understand it well.
Beautifully done.
Sandra

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