Open Poetry #17 |
Dream Weaver's Silent Kiss |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dream Weaver's Silent Kiss Tired and lonely on this warm summer night she goes to bed only to toss and turn as her spirit seeks to free itself and search in quest of the one who touches the deepest parts of her soul Finally she drifts off allowing the fantasy to take her to a place where her heart can feel the presence of the man of her dreams waiting with open arms to hold her safe from all harm Touching the edge of her senses she feels the faintest of caresses as if from her lover bending over her breathing gently on her while she is in restful sleep With a sigh she lets her senses open to the presence she is sure will vanish if she opens her eyes and turns her face towards the gentle breeze that caresses her A shiver of delight flows from her head to her toes as she feels the loving fingers move softly down her hair to the softness of her throat bringing a gasp of pleasure from her lips As her lips part she feels the flutter of a tender kiss that holds all the promise of love and sensuality that she has always dreamed of having in her life Drinking deeply of the sweet kiss that sets her heart beating with need and desire she is again tempted to open her eyes and see the reality of this tender moment She feels strong arms pull her to the chest of this silent lover who has come to her in a dream so real that she can smell the wonderful masculine odor of his warm skin Lost in the feel, taste and smell of him she melts into his body as he takes the kiss deeper laying claim to her in the most intimate kiss she has ever had She feels a sense of loss as he pulls away from her laying her back on her bed and whispers in a voice that vibrates through her heart and soul that he will always be there to meet her in her dreams With a warm glow of pleasure she opens her eyes from this dream of dreams and sighs holding tight to the sound of his voice as a silent tear runs down her cheek and she gives thanks to Dream Weaver for weaving her a dream that touched reality in the magic of a silent kiss Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful dream! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
What a dream!? I'm not sure if the dream weaver is the good one here in weaving this almost real dream or it's simply you..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love your poem, it reminded me of a poetess here in pip called dreamweaver, she was great I miss her poems. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That dream weaverette has brought me many wonderful moments....as you have, Startime |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Elizabeth...I am so glad you liked this one. I have over 30 Dream Weaver poems similar to this this one. On some boards I am known for my Dream Weavers. **hugs** My Enchanted_Melody...*grin* each Dream Weaver is based on a part of me...these are just visions and dreams that I have. I am so glad you like it. **hugs** walker...I do not know of a poetess named dreamweaver but since I first started writing I have written Dream Weavers. I love the fantasy of them. I am so glad you liked this one. **hugs** Balladeer...*grin* I am sure your dreams were woven with much more heat in them but I am glad you were able to enjoy this one. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned Karen! Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen This is an absolute masterpiece....I loved it. Where would we be without our dreams and our dreamweavers?? Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nancy...I am so very glad you enjoyed this little fantasy. **hugs** Sue...*grin* I for one would be a very unhappy person. I am glad you liked this Dream Weaver. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - what beautiful words you have woven in this writing. A silent kiss, a most touching thought... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lost in the feel, taste and smell of him'' where better to be lost, Karen you write love and dreams so beautifully....hugs to you... Lauren~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...it would be my luck to dream I was being kissed by a special woman and wake up with a dog licking my face...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bill...I am so glad you enjoyed the silent kiss. *grin* it is the only kind I have so it is right that I should write about them. **hugs** Lauren...If one must get lost I can think of no better way. I am really glad you liked this dream. **hugs** James...*giggling* that is too funny.....but I know just what you mean. sometimes I wake up kissing my body pillow. Somehow it just isn't the same. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, may I please have a taste of whatever you are sipping before bed to make this dream??? How perfect it is..Too bad to wake up, hm? Sandra |
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