Open Poetry #17 |
With A Heart Crying In Sadness... |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
With A Heart Crying In Sadness By: Noah Eaton 11/27/01 The day I first Knew love so true I instantly Fell in love with you Now deep down My heart is bleeding We're so far apart I'm scared you will never be with me… With a heart crying in sadness Of such sweet sorrow If we ever meet I'll promise you love eternity With a heart breaking in sadness Marred in days of broken memories Is our love extenuate? Will you be here with me? I solicit for hope straight I plead to God at night With fingers clenched together Pressed up tight If I will ever hold her close Be the loving person I want to be Caress a face Of a love so heavenly… With a heart crying in sadness Of such sweet sorrow If we ever meet I'll promise you love eternity With a heart breaking in sadness Marred in days of broken memories Is our love extenuate? Will you be here with me? Here with me… If I had just one wish With these cold empty hands I would sweep her off her feet And I can understand That we are meant to be This fragile heart won't break And someday before I die I'll have a loving soulmate I'm falling to my knees My lovesick heart bleeds Oh God, let me be with her please She is the love of my dreams I need you so badly I want you so dearly I've never asked for something so badly I want to love somebody With a heart crying in sadness Of such sweet sorrow If we ever meet I'll promise you love eternity With a heart breaking in sadness Marred in days of broken memories Is our love extenuate? Will you be here with me? I'm lonely I feel I have nobody I want you, my love My heart weeps for you With a heart crying in sadness… |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Put your heart to work, dear Noah. Love can always find a way. It may take work and time but in the end it will be worth every effort you make to hold true love in your arms. I join my prayers to yours that you will be filled with the love you so desire. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awww...don't let your heart cry. For You are going to have true love and happiness, its only a metter of time. ((((Big Hugs)))) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A fine poem. I hope you are coping well. One thing for sure the heart really feels sadness, but it can recover with a little help. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe we all get our chance at love...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..James is right and you are so deserving. You may feel alone in a crowded room simply because your heart is overwhelmed with need for one..who is missing you with every brush of crowded room she meets the same. It will come Noah. Please believe. Prayers for virtuous meet of beautiful hearts. Love and Hugs! Sincerely, Regina [This message has been edited by rwood (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Noah, my heart is breaking over this one. You have written this pain so beautifully, but the pain still cries through. I hope you get your wish dear one. You have such a big heart, and we all love you so much for it. I hope your wish comes true. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
noah, be patient. i think (duh) that (duh) you've got (duh) nothing (duh) to worry (duh) about, because (duh) joanna's not gonna let you get away ( :P ) so there. -Dave |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, I'm so sorry your hear is in so much pain.Know that you will have that love and be able to give thelove you have to share.MY heart and thoughts and prayers go out to you my dear frind Peaches |
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