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Let my lips explore
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Let my lips explore |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Let my lips explore Wonderful topography They need company Now fingers join tactilely Tenderly caressing you Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Nice and sensual. I'm lovin' this! I think I'm going to post something in a minute : ) Thanks! RP |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
let your lips explore fingertips trace with adore leave me begging.....more  loved this wonderfully done |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* to feel the passionate exploreation of loving lips. How long it has been and how very beautifully you have given me this senual vision with your words. *sigh* I am feeling so romantic after reading this poem. Thank you, so much. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Wow! Short, but very sweet! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
RosePetal - Wow. Did this inspire? I hope so. SEA - I start at the top wend my way slowly downward meanderingly Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Startime - That is wonderful that my work can ignite such feeling Thank you.Domzi - Yes. In poetry I like short and sweet Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think I just melted into you..... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like it, I like it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Enchantress - Lucky me Walker - Thank you. Thank you James - Thanks for the read and the nice comment Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice indeed... very enjoyable... regards, sudhir |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Are you an adventurous Explorer? I enjoyed this short kiss. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Sudhir - Thank you creative one Midnitesun - I am the Christopher Columbus of poets Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
............. sigh ....... what can I say but that I like this one a whole lot! *~coco~* |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Coco - What a wonderful compliment. Thank you Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* I like it a lot.... |
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