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Dreamy Song
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Dreamy Song |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Though darkness has to settle O'er the quiet land each night And it may seem bleak and dreary This is when our hopes take flight. The thoughts I keep inside my heart Wend their way to my mind And in the morn, a treasure's there I never hoped to find. In my loving dreams I'm happy And my weary soul's at peace When dreams sing their song inside my heart With no melodic cease. No matter what your dream is Listen for its serenade And you'll feel your own doubts leave you And away your fears will fade. So when the morning breaks once more To bring a bright new day The dream will have left you courage That in your soul will stay.  God bless America, my home sweet home. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (12-26-2001 08:00 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here's to courage, from whatever source  Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Deamy indeed Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"The thoughts I keep inside my heart Wend their way to my mind" great write great lines bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
this is very uplifting, very soothing to read. Enjoyed. Emily |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* I don't know how you did it but you hit the nail on the head. Dreams give me the strength and hope I need to carry on. That is why I love to write them. This Dreamy Song is absolutely wonderful. Thank you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dreamy does indeed describe this! Cor |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Interloper-yes, here's to courage! *tips her glass* Thank you! Lunatic, I'm glad you liked it! Bernie, thank you for the compliment! Emily, thanks for your kindness! Startime-me too! My dreams make me feel special. Corinne, thank you for your nice words!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is nice, have no suggestions, I really don't know what I'm doing but I'm enjoying it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
<IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/remybussi.gif"><IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/remybussi.gif"><IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/remybussi.gif"> (sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend! Yes, yes, may we all smile as we find our place in the sun and greet a brand new day with love and cheer! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! <IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/natur/petals.gif"> May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2001 11:41 AM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very dreamy, Elizabeth! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Thank you, Robert, Noah, and Denise! I'm glad you all liked it.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You write and obviously live dreams well Elizabeth, this was lovely ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- Beautifully uplifting write, my friend. Much enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Mysteria, thank you. I enjoy my dreams muchly! Vicky, thank you. I don't often write happier poems, so this was a change of pace for me. I'm glad it went over well.  to both of youGod bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
We must have had courage to get through 2001..and hopefully we will have some left to get through 2002 ha...nicely done Elizabeth loved it~Victoria~ |
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