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Open Poetry #17

Looking for Me

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-27 02:25 PM

I woke up this morning
with something on my mind,
I could not ignore it
the truth I had to find.

I'm not sure when I lost it
or where its supposed to be,
How could this have happened
expecially to me.

Behind all the things
that I have now become,
Somewhere along the way
I had forgotton to include fun.

So today I will ignore it,
all the responsiblities,
I hand you my wallet, my kids
and my keys.
For today it dawned apon me,
I need to find ME.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2001-11-27 02:38 PM

Yes sometime one needs to take a breath for themselfs.
Nice write

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-11-28 05:30 PM

think many can relate to these feelings.
Well done

nippa
New Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 1

3 posted 2001-11-28 06:57 PM

Fee i am a mother off three and im 30 years old and your poem just hits the nail on the head my feelings exactly ..where is the time i used to have for myself taken by bieng a mother and wife .nippa

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-12-07 05:24 PM

nope..we shouldn't forget to have a little fun on the way. I'm having fun, and in my treasure hunt I have found a name we don't see here often enough.

enjoyed!

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-01-04 09:48 PM

It's nice to know that others can relate and I am not just going nuts.

Temptress you are just one in a million, I will try a little more often.

Sorry about this delay in my reply, but I actually went o/seas for a months holiday {{{grin}}}

HUGS HUGS HEAPS OF HUGS

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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